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10-12-2006, 08:00 PM
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The Melody of Misery
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: The Island of Conclusions (You get there by jumping!)...
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Bellyn has left the building.
Any issues, let me know. I was a little sketchy with the whole "getting Bellyn's horse" thing, I wasn't sure how that should have gone, so if I need to edit that, I'm all for suggestions. Also...I didn't know/remember exactly where the girls were supposed to be headed, so if you don't want them going towards the White Mountains, I could edit that too. Just let me know. 
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10-12-2006, 08:42 PM
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Stormdancer of Doom
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars
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... I like it....
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...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve. |
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10-22-2006, 10:53 AM
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The Melody of Misery
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: The Island of Conclusions (You get there by jumping!)...
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Hello? Is there anybody out there?
(Just nod if you can hear me  )-Aylwen
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...Come down now, they'll say. But everything looks perfect from far away - Come down now! But we'll stay. |
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10-22-2006, 11:55 AM
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La Belle Dame sans Merci
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: perpetual uncertainty
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[is lurking]
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peace
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10-22-2006, 03:18 PM
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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: The Edge of Faerie
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Let's generate a plot outline. That may help to guide us in knowing who should be posting and when. What needs to be happening? What can happen?
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10-22-2006, 03:24 PM
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La Belle Dame sans Merci
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: perpetual uncertainty
Posts: 5,517
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Since you guys have already foreshadowed Indil's appearance, my self-imposed limitation is to wait until Bergil finds her before expanding or introducing her more.
Which means, as I said, I'm just lurking for now.
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10-22-2006, 03:29 PM
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Riveting Ribbiter
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Assigned to Mordor
Posts: 1,767
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I thought that it didn't make a lot of sense for Saethyrd to appear until all of the ladies were on their way to the White Mountains. My idea was that there would be more drama if they were already in the mountains and then - uhoh - it comes out that Saethyrd is lurking nearby. So I'm lurking too for the present.
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People assume that time is a strict progression of cause to effect. But actually, from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint, it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly, timey-wimey... stuff. |
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10-22-2006, 07:34 PM
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Tears of the Phoenix
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Putting dimes in the jukebox baby.
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I have not posted the second dream meeting with Gwyllion because it hasn't felt right. Since she didn't know Bella that well, I thought that it would be better to write it when a lady who she was better aquainted with (Mellonin) disappeared as it were.
Hence, I'm also lurking.
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I'm sorry it wasn't a unicorn. It would have been nice to have unicorns. Last edited by Imladris; 10-22-2006 at 07:49 PM. |
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