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10-29-2006, 07:09 PM
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Itinerant Songster
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Nice post, Foley. Eodwine will not be quite so combative as the second to the final paragraph has him, especially in his current mood of pity for Ritun and Lefun. I think all you need therefore of the last paragraph is the final sentence. I'll have a post up perhaps tonight with Eodwine's reply.
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10-29-2006, 07:24 PM
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Right ho, captain, sir!
So, the second to last paragraph and the last paragraph are going out, and the last sentence is being kept.... Will look forward to your post. -- Folwren
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11-07-2006, 09:58 AM
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Itinerant Songster
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Clarification Regarding the Twins
Just so it's really clear and we all get the description (and our own perceptions of what's going on) the same: the twins are not two heads on one body; rather, they split at the mid-section and have two torsos, and two pairs of arms, as well as two heads. Please make sure you describe your character's perceptions accordingly. Thanks!
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11-07-2006, 02:41 PM
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Celuien: I have used your family somewhat. Hopefully that is okay. I have tried to make things go forwards and to kind of open the wound that was never stiched among the children...
Please let me know if I have done something in a wrong way and I'll correct it.
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11-07-2006, 03:51 PM
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Riveting Ribbiter
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Looks fine.
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11-08-2006, 02:13 AM
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11-08-2006, 04:54 AM
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Itinerant Songster
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Thanks, Lommy.
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11-08-2006, 10:49 AM
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Flame of the Ainulindalë
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Lmp: Did the things in your last post happen before or after the things described on mine just before it in the thread?
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11-08-2006, 10:13 PM
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Itinerant Songster
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I'm sorry, it was late and I didn't tie my post into yours. I shall edit.
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