The Fellowship of the Fourth Age (Part 1): A New Beginning Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Folwren · 11-28-2006, 09:14 AM

Tevildo,

It looks alright to me. Athwen is quite ready to go behind the lines and start working as a doctor instead of as one of the fighters.

Only one thing I noticed was that when he was pulling Hadith's body towards a horse, you refered to it as Athwen's horse. Was it actually her horse, or was it the slaver's horse? Her horse is somewhere nearby, I guess. He just trotted away a little bit when the slaver grabbed Athwen and they were fighting. Hadith would definitely be safest on her horse.

Is Dorran going to be going with them, or is he going to stay out and find more people to fight?

Nogrod, in your post, are you planning on going all the way to the place where the women and children are? If you're just doing a post about him during the fight and being taken to the horse and put on it, then I will plan to post and take them all the way to the sheltered place. But if you want to go all the way there, then that's fine. If you're not going to be able to fill your save immediately, let me know where you intend to stop, and I may be able to write a post.

-- Folwren

Nogrod · 11-28-2006, 10:05 AM

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Nogrod, in your post, are you planning on going all the way to the place where the women and children are? If you're just doing a post about him during the fight and being taken to the horse and put on it, then I will plan to post and take them all the way to the sheltered place.

Go ahead. I will end up where Hadith is put on horseback...

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Is Dorran going to be going with them, or is he going to stay out and find more people to fight?

If I have counted it right, there will be something like 4-5 slavers still alive around the tunnel and if Khamir has turned to go back with the rest 6 of the escapees there will be just a couple of ex-slaves to fight them (Joshwan, Erlech, the bearded one and Fewerth). Of those at least Joshwan is going to die there, soon to come...

Durelin · 11-28-2006, 10:20 AM

Nogrod - Khamir and Adnan are going to stay around the tunnel at least for a little while longer. They still have to figure out what to do about Vror. They're going to try and get him awake somehow, and then deliberate over whether or not to try and carry him somewhere, where and how to carry him, etc. He's quite heavy, and it's dangerous to move him for several reasons. So, while they're there, any remaining slavers can be sent their way. Or if anyone else wants to run into them, feel free.

If the fact that Khamir and Adnan are going to stay where they are conflicts with your and/or others posts, then that can certainly change.

I'll post for them and for the three NPC slaves that are going to try and help protect the women and children as soon as possible.

Sorry I haven't yet. Life has been crazy with lots of Calculus and a funeral yesterday...

Folwren · 11-28-2006, 11:06 AM

Durelin, if Athwen with two horses and Hadith rode near Khamir and Adnan and Vror, would that help in your dilema of trying to figure out what to do with the dwarf? If she rides by (she has to go around the tunnel), they could hail her and she could come and get off of her horse and they could lift Vror up on him and then she could lead the two horses back to the place where she's going to go set up doctoring shop.

Let me know whenever you can. I hope to post sometime this afternoon. We'll see.

Good luck on your finals!

-- Folwren

Tevildo · 11-28-2006, 04:17 PM

Thanks for all the feedback. I'll get to those revisions this evening. I haven't decided yet what to do with Dorran next. When I do, I'll let you know here for sure.

I wanted to get a post up for Azhar next.

Nogrod · 11-28-2006, 05:44 PM

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I haven't decided yet what to do with Dorran next.

That kind of brings us to the question I made earlier: what is our cavalry / archery doing? I have no characters involved in either group and have not paid too much attention to them. But really we should share some basics just to be able to write.

Any ideas? I'm most hesitant to bring anything forwards as my characters are not involved... (in the last RPG I got negative feedback for trying to think for the others and so I would like to stay away from this one)

It would be best for those involved to come forwards in both of the groups...

Folwren · 11-28-2006, 05:50 PM

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Any ideas? I'm most hesitant to bring anything forwards as my characters are not involved... (in the last RPG I got negative feedback for trying to think for the others and so I would like to stay away from this one)

Poor Nogrod! I can't help but chuckle. Yes, I remember that. All the same, I can't help but appreciate you and your technicality in all this stuff...

I don't have anyone in either groups, either, but in Hilde Bracegirdle's last post about Carl, Lindir told Carl to take down as many as he could of the people crossing the tunnel and then retreat farther back to try to find another of the groups that branched off. Lindir also said in that post, I believe, that he was drawing his archers off someplace....you should check that post. It has some answers to your questions about the archers.

And Brinniel's character was in the calvary, and she has a save up.

Tevildo: Your save cracks me up. Poor Azhar - does she wish she'd gone with Kwell now?

-- Folwren

11-28-2006, 09:14 AM	#1
Folwren Messenger of Hope Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In a tiny, insignificant little town in one of the many States. Posts: 5,076	Tevildo, It looks alright to me. Athwen is quite ready to go behind the lines and start working as a doctor instead of as one of the fighters. Only one thing I noticed was that when he was pulling Hadith's body towards a horse, you refered to it as Athwen's horse. Was it actually her horse, or was it the slaver's horse? Her horse is somewhere nearby, I guess. He just trotted away a little bit when the slaver grabbed Athwen and they were fighting. Hadith would definitely be safest on her horse. Is Dorran going to be going with them, or is he going to stay out and find more people to fight? Nogrod, in your post, are you planning on going all the way to the place where the women and children are? If you're just doing a post about him during the fight and being taken to the horse and put on it, then I will plan to post and take them all the way to the sheltered place. But if you want to go all the way there, then that's fine. If you're not going to be able to fill your save immediately, let me know where you intend to stop, and I may be able to write a post. -- Folwren __________________ A young man who wishes to remain a sound atheist cannot be too careful of his reading. - C.S. Lewis

11-28-2006, 11:06 AM	#4
Folwren Messenger of Hope Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In a tiny, insignificant little town in one of the many States. Posts: 5,076	Durelin, if Athwen with two horses and Hadith rode near Khamir and Adnan and Vror, would that help in your dilema of trying to figure out what to do with the dwarf? If she rides by (she has to go around the tunnel), they could hail her and she could come and get off of her horse and they could lift Vror up on him and then she could lead the two horses back to the place where she's going to go set up doctoring shop. Let me know whenever you can. I hope to post sometime this afternoon. We'll see. Good luck on your finals! -- Folwren __________________ A young man who wishes to remain a sound atheist cannot be too careful of his reading. - C.S. Lewis

11-28-2006, 04:17 PM	#5
Tevildo Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Curled up on Melko's lap Posts: 425	Thanks for all the feedback. I'll get to those revisions this evening. I haven't decided yet what to do with Dorran next. When I do, I'll let you know here for sure. I wanted to get a post up for Azhar next. __________________ Now Tevildo was a mighty cat--the mightiest of all--and possessed of an evil spirit,...and he was in Melko's constant following; and that cat had all cats subject to him, and he and his subjects were the chasers and getters of meat for Melko's table.

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11-28-2006, 10:20 AM	#3
Durelin Estelo dagnir, Melo ring Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 3,063	Nogrod - Khamir and Adnan are going to stay around the tunnel at least for a little while longer. They still have to figure out what to do about Vror. They're going to try and get him awake somehow, and then deliberate over whether or not to try and carry him somewhere, where and how to carry him, etc. He's quite heavy, and it's dangerous to move him for several reasons. So, while they're there, any remaining slavers can be sent their way. Or if anyone else wants to run into them, feel free. If the fact that Khamir and Adnan are going to stay where they are conflicts with your and/or others posts, then that can certainly change. I'll post for them and for the three NPC slaves that are going to try and help protect the women and children as soon as possible. Sorry I haven't yet. Life has been crazy with lots of Calculus and a funeral yesterday...