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12-12-2006, 01:58 PM
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Messenger of Hope
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: In a tiny, insignificant little town in one of the many States.
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Save filled.
However - I did not write in Azhar's coming up and asking if Athwen needs help. That means I'm going to have to edit it again. I'll do that, Tevildo, have no fear...I will do that. Sometime. -- Folwren
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12-12-2006, 04:03 PM
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Reflection of Darkness
Join Date: Jun 2002
Location: Polishing the stars. Well, somebody has to do it; they're looking a little bit dull.
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 Perhaps I should've cut it down a bit, but I didn't have the heart to. I also considered cutting it into two posts, but that didn't happen either.Sorry if it's caused any sort of inconvenience. I guess I tend to ramble in my writing, especially when it comes to dialogue. 
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12-12-2006, 04:13 PM
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Flame of the Ainulindalë
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves
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 Happily I have a habit of writing my posts in paper on cafe's or in the neighbourhood Czech-pub, so I need to re-write them with the computer (not yet owning a laptop). That kind of neatly reduces them to only two-pages (and lessens the grammatical errors and widens the vocabulary as I have a dictionary at home)! 
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12-12-2006, 07:03 PM
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Estelo dagnir, Melo ring
Join Date: Oct 2002
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Oh no, it's no problem Brinniel! I marvel at those who can write so much and so well! I'm also a little envious of you people: yery rarely can I sit down and right anything very lengthy. The most I've ever written of something continuous is 8 pages. I guess I have a little ADD when it comes to writing.
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12-13-2006, 01:39 PM
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Messenger of Hope
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: In a tiny, insignificant little town in one of the many States.
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Tevildo,
I have edited my post and put Azhar into it. Tell me if it's alright, because I used her a little bit, too. -- Folwren
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12-14-2006, 04:03 PM
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Relic of Wandering Days
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: You'll See Perpetual Change.
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Carl's post is up.
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12-15-2006, 12:15 PM
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Shade of Carn Dûm
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Curled up on Melko's lap
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Folwren,
Your post looks great. Check your pm's. I've sent through some ideas on this.
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