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Flame of the Ainulindalë
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Okay. I'll post my stuff with the two lads and lord Eodwine first via PM to both of you lmp and Cel. I have also the part with Stigend and Leof written once but as they're both on paper and not on digital format it will take some time to actually write them here.
But if you are in no hurry, please wait a second lmp and Cel. It's just funny that after a long time of sleeping all the people are rushing in their contributions. But I hope you will understand my worries here this time as I've managed to outdate my stories twice in three days so I just wish to check it this time to not make things in vain. And Foley, this is nothing as a comment of what you have written... just don't bother even thinking so. The one who writes, writes, and others will need to adjust to that. So you've done nothing wrong to my eye - I myself have been slow between my plans and the execution of them. So don't read it that way..., well anyone.
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Messenger of Hope
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: In a tiny, insignificant little town in one of the many States.
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Quote:
-- Folwren
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Join Date: Jan 2002
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As I said via PM, Noggie, if you have a really good post for Cnebba, Garmund, and Foley's bandit, I'd rather have it posted and Foley and me edit.
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Messenger of Hope
Join Date: Jun 2005
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My outlaw is really more like a free for all character. I just wanted to write that one part, because I had a hankering for a cockney accent. Just, when he talks, add h's where they don't belong, and take them off where they do.
-- Folwren
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Flame of the Ainulindalë
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Please don't bother. It was probably "really good", but it was also a bit too gory anyway as it ended up with the brute slamming Garmund to the ground with a mighty blow, banging Cnebba to the stonewall and in the end Garmund slashing the hollow of his knee with the shearing knife while he was up to his bussiness with killing Cnebba, sending him down as well. And then the boys would have mashed his head with stones they found from around without thinking, just acting on instinct... Then they would have gotten startled and confused... afraid and terrified of what they'd done.
But as I said. It's nicer this way. I've already PM'd the next one to lmp & Cel. And much nicer anyway.
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Messenger of Hope
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Meep. That would've been violent.
![]() I'm glad I stepped in. ![]() ![]() See, I figured he thought he had time, so he, as my character, was going to play with them, as a cat does a mouse, and if things got dangerous, then he probably would've gotten violent. But I also thought that if they wanted, they could have tried to kidnap the two kids and turned them into life long outlaws. -- Folwrey
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Flame of the Ainulindalë
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Good you stepped in Foley!
Okay I've written a double-post. If you Firefoot have somenthing to change please let me know. And as lmp or Celuien have not strongly disapproved I also decided to send the part with their characters a well as to make some proggress in the overall game. If you have any reclamations - mainly elempi as I have used your character the most - please inform me and I change what needs to be changed.
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