HOB - Chapters into Scenes Weekly

[TheGreatElvenWarrior]

Originally Posted by Sauron the White

The Dwarves need their backstory to be explained so that the entire quest of the Dwarves makes some sense. Gollum needs to be right where he is in the story - no more , no less. Open in the Shire with Bilbo, go to Gandalf, then the arrival of Thorin and company, and let them reveal the history to Bilbo and the audience.

Yes, that needs to be the opening scene. It needs to open in a nice sunny scene!