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Auspicious Wraith
Join Date: May 2002
Location: The Netherlands
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Ok. Lommy, I'm not sure if you want your characters to die now, but I left it open for you. I think it might be too grim if they are killed in front of the friends, though. Do you want them killed in your epilogue?
If so, the noise that I left in my post can be my fellow prisoners escaping. Miko alluded to them in his first post. You can write around them, though. I'd rather describe them myself. ![]() So, I will post once more for the story, and once more for the epilogue.
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