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03-09-2009, 12:51 PM
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Mellifluous Maia
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: A glade open to the stars, deep in Nan Elmoth
Posts: 3,489
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A short off-topic rant, if you don't mind
This might seem petty but I have to note
This Tuor fellow's lines are oddly short at first I thought there might be something more; but scanning them revealed uneven feet. While posting in blank verse can be quite fun such arbitrary breaks can disconcert and interrupt the flow and reading ease. 
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