The Narn i Chîn Húrin: Beleg & Falivirn - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Aran e-Godhellim · 04-21-2009, 08:17 AM

I agree with all your changes (I actually meant to change "mocking he set" to "mocking set," but forgot) except for line 188. I think "did tauntingly" fits better here.

And I used the spelling "casque" from a line earlier in the work: when Thingol receives the helm. I'm not sure if the Anglicized version is even correct; usually it means a large barrel.

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04-21-2009, 08:17 AM	#30
Aran e-Godhellim Haunting Spirit Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: The Halls of Mandos Posts: 86	I agree with all your changes (I actually meant to change "mocking he set" to "mocking set," but forgot) except for line 188. I think "did tauntingly" fits better here. And I used the spelling "casque" from a line earlier in the work: when Thingol receives the helm. I'm not sure if the Anglicized version is even correct; usually it means a large barrel.