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07-06-2002, 05:40 PM
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Shade of Carn Dûm
Join Date: May 2002
Location: stronghold of the North
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Samwise, very nice style (as far as I can judge). As for the ideas - one seems quite banal - disappearing kids, perhaps Tom included. Another is a bit wierd for your story, but still - something about the preacher (sorry if the word isn't suitable). Did he arrive from some other time? Or another world?
No real help,I know [img]smilies/confused.gif[/img]
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