Chapter 1: Of the Beginning of Time - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

ArcusCalion · 11-05-2017, 07:32 PM

I have a minor point: Should the term Outer Lands be used? or should it not be changed to Middle-earth, to avoid the confusion of what is meant?

also I think Fin's "were" addition in the 15b sentence should be "where" and should come before the comma. Aside from that, I think it looks great!

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11-05-2017, 07:32 PM	#34
ArcusCalion Quentingolmo Join Date: Aug 2017 Posts: 525	I have a minor point: Should the term Outer Lands be used? or should it not be changed to Middle-earth, to avoid the confusion of what is meant? also I think Fin's "were" addition in the 15b sentence should be "where" and should come before the comma. Aside from that, I think it looks great!