Concerning Galadriel and Celeborn - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Findegil · 05-29-2018, 05:35 PM

BY-HL-08.2 & BY-HL-08.4: As ArcusCalion I as well found the change of subject at the beginning of the Elessar abrupt. So I agree to take up the headline, but then we have to put another one at the end of the Elessar stuff. And since we don’t have any good text for it, this can only be an editorial addition of ‘* * *’.

CGC-SL-00.3 & CGC-SL-00.67: Thanks for catching these!

CGC-SL-00.7c: I agree, you approach is much safer than mine. But I will call the complete removal CGC-SL-00.7c, following the old agreement that letters nominate different variants of the same change.

CGC-SL-13.5: Okay, reading the sentence same time after changing it, I agree that it reads awkward. We leave the addition of ‘than in Lindon’ out.

CGC-SL-20.5: Agreed, this might have been an artefact of shifting around passages.

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Findegil

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05-29-2018, 05:35 PM	#10
Findegil King's Writer Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,721	BY-HL-08.2 & BY-HL-08.4: As ArcusCalion I as well found the change of subject at the beginning of the Elessar abrupt. So I agree to take up the headline, but then we have to put another one at the end of the Elessar stuff. And since we don’t have any good text for it, this can only be an editorial addition of ‘* * ’. CGC-SL-00.3* & CGC-SL-00.67: Thanks for catching these! CGC-SL-00.7c: I agree, you approach is much safer than mine. But I will call the complete removal CGC-SL-00.7c, following the old agreement that letters nominate different variants of the same change. CGC-SL-13.5: Okay, reading the sentence same time after changing it, I agree that it reads awkward. We leave the addition of ‘than in Lindon’ out. CGC-SL-20.5: Agreed, this might have been an artefact of shifting around passages. Respectfully Findegil