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Old 09-18-2017, 11:33 AM   #1
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Silmaril Of Thingol and Melian

This is the first draft of the chapter Of Thingol and Melian.

Our basis text is that of the Later Quenta Silmarillion given in HoME 10; page 171-173. Wherever the text is different from that this is marked by an editing mark.

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TM-xx for all changes or questions, as it is a short chapter, and does not need extensive notes.

Some conventions of my writing:
Normal Text is from the basic text that is mentioned above (when I change the basic-Text it will be mentioned)
Bold Text = source information, comments and remarks
{example} = text that should be deleted
[example] = normalised text, normally only used for general changes
<source example> = additions with source information
...... = This section of the paragraph is unchanged from the source.


31 Thus it came to pass that {Elu-thingol [>} Elw Singollo{]} and many of his folk abode in Beleriand and went not to Valinor.
Melian was a maia, of the race of the Valar. She dwelt in the gardens of {Olofantur}[Lrin], and among all his fair folk there was none more beautiful than she, nor more wise, nor more skilled in songs of enchantment. It is told that the {gods}[Valar] would leave their business, and the birds of Valinor their mirth, that the bells of {Valmar}[Valimar] were silent and the fountains ceased to flow, ....... with her voice and with the voices of her birds.
32 Now it came to pass that when their journey was near its end the folk of Elw rested long and dwelt in Beleriand beyond {Gelion}[Duin Daer]; and King Elw went often through the great woods, for he had friendship with the Noldor who lay to the westward, and with Finw their lord. And it chanced on a time TM-01 <AAm as he journeyed homeward from a meeting with Finw,> that he came alone to the starlit wood of Nan Elmoth, and there on a sudden he heard the song of nightingales. Then an enchantment fell upon him, and he stood still; and afar off beyond the voices of the lomelindi [Footnote: lomelindi: 'dusk-singers' = nightingales.] he heard ...... Aman was in her face TM-02 <AAm and a starlit mist was about her.> No word she spoke; but being filled with love ..... spoke any word one to another.
33 Thus Elw’s folk who sought him found him not, and Olw took the kingship of the Teleri and departed; but Elw Singollo came never again across the sea to Valinor TM-03 <AAm greatly though he had desired it. Yet the Light of Aman was in the face of Melian the fair TM-04 <GA as in an unclouded mirror>, and in that light he was content.>{; and}[And] Melian returned not thither while their realm together lasted; and of her a strain {of the [read:} of the race of the{]} immortal {gods}[Ainur] came among both Elves and Men, as hereafter shall be told. In after days TM-05 <AAm he became a king renowned, and {their}[his] hidden halls were in Menegroth, the Thousand Caves, in Doriath; and his folk were all the Eldar of Beleriand; the Sindar they were named, the Grey-elves, the Elves of the Twilight; and as Thingol Greymantle he was known {in the [read:} to all in the{]} tongue of that land. TM-06 <AAm But he was a great lord and noble, tallest of all the Children of Ilvatar, TM-07 <GA his hair as grey silver, and his eyes like unto stars{.}[,]>and like unto a lord of the Maiar; and a great doom was before him.> And Melian was his Queen, wiser than any child of Middle-earth; and of the love of Thingol and Melian there came into the world the fairest of all the Children of Ilvatar that was or ever shall be.> Great power Melian lent to Thingol her spouse, who was in himself great among the Eldar; for he alone of all the Forsaken had seen with his own eyes the Trees in the day of their flowering, and king though he {were [> } was{]} of {Alamanyar [>} manyar{]}, he was not accounted among the Moriquendi, but with the Elves of the Light, mighty upon Middle-earth.
All of the changes were taken from AAm or GA, and were merely expansions of the LQ text, adding in descriptors that were absent in the LQ text.

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