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Old 10-10-2020, 03:34 PM   #323
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Originally Posted by Galadriel55 View Post
The performances and titles / lyrics will have to wait until after the weekend, when I will be free again to waste time at the computer. But a quick note - I noticed yesterday that you changed "forthcoming" to "promise of death"?
Oh, yes, I did. "Forthcoming" always felt a bit off to me, and I figured "promise of" still captures the meaning, while flowing better and adding a little foreshadowing: he does after all bring about her death ((twice!).

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