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Old 07-18-2020, 02:09 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by Finrod's Duel
But greater is the guilt
Of he who in the dark
Shameless and stark
Taught pride to Elven hearts-!
"In shameless farce"? "Shameless in arts"? Aaaaahhh!

Originally Posted by Epilogue
Why did my fair brother go
Into sunset glow,
Forgiving all oaths?
"And forgive all oaths"?

Originally Posted by Epilogue
Did he reach a final accord
In his daunting struggle with fate?
What left he behind in his wake
When he took the Westernly road?
"When to West Wind he was restored"?

Late edits:

Slightly altered the beginning of Captivity, because I realized I'm missing beats.

Originally Posted by Meeting of Lutien and Beren
Fates apart, joining them is risky
"Fates apart, and joining them is risky"?

Originally Posted by Truth
Is the secret heart of mortals.
Maybe just "The secret etc".

Originally Posted by Luthien's Duel
I will take what is and always has been mine!
"And I will take"?

Originally Posted by Likewise
Love will melt the chains of cold
Tear down walls of stone and burn the bars away!
Suggestions for "My love" and "the walls".
You passed from under darkened dome, you enter now the secret land. - Take me to Finrod's fabled home!... ~ Finrod: The Rock Opera

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