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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-11-2019, 09:03 PM
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Replies: 242
Views: 242,143
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ArcusCalion
In that case you could both review the current...
In that case you could both review the current chapter posted in the forum from Volume 3: the Ambarcanta. Only gondowe replied to the thread, and did not offer too many comments. You could both... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-11-2019, 09:23 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 20,012
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ArcusCalion
I agree with gandalf's placement much more. it...
I agree with gandalf's placement much more. it flows better. |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-09-2019, 12:01 PM
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Replies: 66
Views: 48,428
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ArcusCalion
Sending this draft to gandalf, I realized I had...
Sending this draft to gandalf, I realized I had made some changes that I had not commented on. I will do so here: 1) Since we have elsewhere taken new information from the Book of Lost Tales, and... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-09-2019, 11:17 AM
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Replies: 242
Views: 242,143
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ArcusCalion
Since gandalf has now reviewed all the drafts of...
Since gandalf has now reviewed all the drafts of the second and third age, and we have revised them accordingly, perhaps Fin should update the status of those chapters to finished? Regardless of... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-09-2019, 11:03 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 20,012
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ArcusCalion
1) I agree to remove the but, but I removed that...
1) I agree to remove the but, but I removed that later sentence because the same info is repeated in the return to the original text later on: To keep the smaller sentence in thus seems redundant to... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-08-2019, 10:14 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 15,324
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ArcusCalion
This works well, I agree to it. This should be...
This works well, I agree to it. This should be marked RSO-SL-23.5 however because it is an addition to this chapter, even if it was earlier placed elsewhere. |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-08-2019, 03:09 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 19,855
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ArcusCalion
3) Agreed.
Letter: well done Fin! This fits...
3) Agreed. Letter: well done Fin! This fits well here. Agreed. Other point: Agreed as well. |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-07-2019, 08:41 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 19,855
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ArcusCalion
1) Fin pointed out that the statements are not a...
1) Fin pointed out that the statements are not a contradiction. Saruman was also good for a time, and no doubt did much to prevent Sauron from gaining more power. However, he fell after some time.... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-07-2019, 08:03 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 14,220
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ArcusCalion
1) This is fine. The change should be called:...
1) This is fine. The change should be called: WR-SL-07.5 2) Agreed, I did not notice it had been removed. This bit got moved around somewhat. 3) Great find! The political discussion of Gondor,... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-05-2019, 02:58 PM
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Replies: 28
Views: 17,832
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-05-2019, 02:57 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 15,996
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ArcusCalion
Oh good catch Fin! I have a few points.
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Oh good catch Fin! I have a few points. First, I would make this slight change for smoothness of transition: Second, in this narrative you've made, the Nazgul search the Vale of Anduin twice.... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-05-2019, 11:52 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 15,324
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-03-2019, 06:20 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 15,324
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ArcusCalion
1) Agreed.
2) Agreed.
3) I am unsure of...
1) Agreed. 2) Agreed. 3) I am unsure of the meaning of this as well. Fin, what did you intend by it? 4) Nice catch. |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-03-2019, 03:23 PM
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Replies: 32
Views: 24,177
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-02-2019, 08:34 PM
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Replies: 32
Views: 24,177
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ArcusCalion
I like this very much! Have we mentioned Balin at...
I like this very much! Have we mentioned Balin at all before this? If not we may need to. |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
02-01-2019, 10:18 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 15,996
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ArcusCalion
Thank you! It was certainly time-consuming!
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Thank you! It was certainly time-consuming! 1) Agreed. 2) Agreed for the inclusions. Apologies if I forgot to make a post about the other addition, it must have slipped my mind. 3) I think... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-28-2019, 09:53 PM
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Replies: 32
Views: 24,177
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ArcusCalion
That sort of very limited spoiler is, I think,...
That sort of very limited spoiler is, I think, fine. It reveals very little about the nature of the further narrative, so I think it is ok to leave it. We have similar vague call-forwards in previous... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-28-2019, 09:51 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 19,855
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ArcusCalion
Would you recommend that it be put (in some...
Would you recommend that it be put (in some modified form) at the end of The New Shadow? Or simply removed entirely? |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-28-2019, 12:38 AM
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Replies: 24
Views: 19,855
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ArcusCalion
One more addition for the very end of this...
One more addition for the very end of this chapter after the current last sentence: This was taken from the very end of the Tale of Aragorn and Arwen, but I removed it from that addition earlier,... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-28-2019, 12:27 AM
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Replies: 32
Views: 24,177
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-27-2019, 12:22 PM
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Replies: 32
Views: 24,177
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ArcusCalion
5) I guess this is one of those times that an...
5) I guess this is one of those times that an assumption becomes so ingrained in our heads we think it's canon! I agree to the change, pending any discovery of contradictory canon info. 11) Ah I... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-27-2019, 12:07 AM
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Replies: 32
Views: 24,177
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ArcusCalion
Thank you for your diligence gandalf!
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Thank you for your diligence gandalf! 1) This is fine for me. 2) I like this better as well. Agreed. 3) Yes, Fin did a wonderful job. 4) Agreed |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-21-2019, 11:25 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 14,167
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ArcusCalion
Agreed. They should be HE-SL-18 and HE-SL-19...
Agreed. They should be HE-SL-18 and HE-SL-19 respectively in that chapter. |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-20-2019, 08:00 PM
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Replies: 95
Views: 69,498
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ArcusCalion
Thank you for letting us know! Let me just say...
Thank you for letting us know! Let me just say right off the bat, that since working on this chapter with Fin, I have changed my mind about using the Quendi and the Eldar bits in this chapter, as I... |
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Forum: Translations from the Elvish - Public Forum
01-18-2019, 10:50 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 14,105
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ArcusCalion
1) I love all these additions! For the last one,...
1) I love all these additions! For the last one, I would edit it slightly differently: I just see no reason to remove the 'far away.' 2) Thanks for finding these! |
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