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Okay. How serious are you about wanting feedback, Producernyc? I can critique the treatment for you, all right, but I suspect you won't like much of what I may have to say. Judging from this synopsis, I'm afraid it looks like there are significant issues, both as regards storytelling and "canonicity".
Also, what are your eventual plans for this? It is certainly very ambitious for a fan-film and would be quite expensive to produce, even as an animation.
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