Sequel to The Lord of The Rings "The Dark Tree" Part 1 - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Nerwen · 03-26-2011, 11:07 PM

Okay. How serious are you about wanting feedback, Producernyc? I can critique the treatment for you, all right, but I suspect you won't like much of what I may have to say. Judging from this synopsis, I'm afraid it looks like there are significant issues, both as regards storytelling and "canonicity".

Also, what are your eventual plans for this? It is certainly very ambitious for a fan-film and would be quite expensive to produce, even as an animation.

03-26-2011, 11:07 PM	#7
Nerwen Wisest of the Noldor Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: ˙˙˙ssɐןƃ ƃuıʞooן ǝɥʇ ɥƃnoɹɥʇ Posts: 6,694	Okay. How serious are you about wanting feedback, Producernyc? I can critique the treatment for you, all right, but I suspect you won't like much of what I may have to say. Judging from this synopsis, I'm afraid it looks like there are significant issues, both as regards storytelling and "canonicity". Also, what are your eventual plans for this? It is certainly very ambitious for a fan-film and would be quite expensive to produce, even as an animation. __________________ "Even Nerwen wasn't evil in the beginning." –Elmo.