* * Revised Fall of Gondolin pt 1 [General Revisions & 'Of Tuor' Revisions]* *

[Aiwendil]

How is the mole sable thing is going to be addressed?

I don't see any pressing need to change it. I admit that it seems just a bit out of place, but not, I think, sufficiently so to justify its elimination. It would, at any rate, be odd to retain such detail on all the other captains, and let Maeglin's company go nameless and bannerless.