ME Poetry, a feeble attempt - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Jeli Baggins · 08-23-2002, 01:02 PM

ok here's mine, i may b a hobbit, but i'm fasinated w/ elves and dwarfs and humans and yah noe, get all nervous around them, the usual. (really i do, that's the scary part) [img]smilies/eek.gif[/img]

The Mines of Moria once filled with a great light
The dwarves thrusting hammers with all of thier might
Still greed came over all of thier mind
And they came upon a perilous find

A distant boom was heard in the dark
The dwarves of old had made thier last mark
Weapons and axes the dwarves did not lack
As the orcs came upon then and made thier attack

The once distant boom was growing near
And even the orcs looked up in fear
They all knew that they would be dead
And ere long the orcs had fled

The merciless shadow blocked all light
When one of the dwarves started to write
"We cannot get out, we cannot get out"
And of this saying there was no doubt

haha this is the 1st and only poem i've wrote about my homeland, ME, hope u guys liked it! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]

08-23-2002, 01:02 PM	#13
Jeli Baggins Haunting Spirit Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Hobbiton Posts: 69	ok here's mine, i may b a hobbit, but i'm fasinated w/ elves and dwarfs and humans and yah noe, get all nervous around them, the usual. (really i do, that's the scary part) [img]smilies/eek.gif[/img] The Mines of Moria once filled with a great light The dwarves thrusting hammers with all of thier might Still greed came over all of thier mind And they came upon a perilous find A distant boom was heard in the dark The dwarves of old had made thier last mark Weapons and axes the dwarves did not lack As the orcs came upon then and made thier attack The once distant boom was growing near And even the orcs looked up in fear They all knew that they would be dead And ere long the orcs had fled The merciless shadow blocked all light When one of the dwarves started to write "We cannot get out, we cannot get out" And of this saying there was no doubt haha this is the 1st and only poem i've wrote about my homeland, ME, hope u guys liked it! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] __________________ "My dear Frodo! Hobbits really are amazing creatures. You can learn all that there is to know about their ways in a month, and yet after a hundred years they can still surprise you." ~ Gandalf to Frodo