Wow! Jeli (cool name!), that poem is so good - the rhythm and the rhyme just seem so right! And I love the way the momentum of the poem bulids up as you read it! Oh, and I love the inclusion of the "we cannot get out" bit! Great - you must write more! Prehaps a little poem about the istari prehaps? [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]
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08-23-2002, 02:29 PM
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