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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: The Edge of Faerie
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Good stuff, Imladris! And Lumien and Eswen too! Impressive!
There's just one thing I'd change, Imladris. And iron rod is too blunt to cause the clean snapping of bones that Eswen has described. It would have to be a very sharp, and heavy, knife - not unlike a butcher's knife, which is, in fact (I believe) designed to slice through meat, ligaments, bones, everything. So make it a heavy iron knife, like a butcher knife, and I think you've got it. |
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