The Fall of Greenwood the Great Discussion Thread

[Everdawn]

If you would like, i have room in my post where i could kill Ainemention? Also, i have a post i have been writing about Arië's return home with a small speech from her father, it isnt all finished but there is a passage in there which i like and i think it summs up the feeling of their journey, but i think the whole thing should go right near the end.

Here is a small piece of it in patches.

The elves strayed slowly, every exhausted step was drawing them closer to their home. When at last the came, no cheer was uttered to them, nor words of thanks for their pain….

….She came exhausted to her father, Menorë and stood as he spoke words which offered little comfort to her now, she bowed her head. “I never knew such unbridled hate dwelled in the world.” He spoke, “Until now.” She looked up, her eyes straining against the light of the forest and into the face of her mother and father. His voice was lowered and he bent down to see her. “My only daughter, an innocent, who happened to be one of the few of faith and full of heroism, was one of the few thinking Greenwood able to come back from the brink of annihilation. My only child believing in the deeds of Ceros and his company, strayed out into this once beautiful wood full of life, now this wood, this… Mirkwood brings her here and Ceros has not failed.”

What do you think? [img]smilies/cool.gif[/img]