In the Shadow of the Star: Discussion Thread (Part 1) - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

piosenniel · 03-07-2003, 12:14 PM

I have everything and the alternate writes saved to floppy.

For me, the main thrust of this story/game is the rent in the fabric of time and Cami's reuniting with Maura. Pio is a sideline character here, the birth and all that incidental.

Having said this, I will also say I am not 'married' or 'invested' in either course of action that I've written. Both were interesting excercises from differing points of view.

Please just decide what the story needs and tell me - I will paste the appropriate post into the appropriate box. (Will also be happy to do a complete rewrite in another vein, if that is what is needed)

I did remove the posts concerning Pio riding to the Shiriff's, since should it be decided that Pio need to gut the Vala and get out of town, someone else will have to spring Mithadan.

[ March 07, 2003: Message edited by: piosenniel ]

03-07-2003, 12:14 PM	#11
piosenniel Desultory Dwimmerlaik Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat..... Posts: 7,779	I have everything and the alternate writes saved to floppy. For me, the main thrust of this story/game is the rent in the fabric of time and Cami's reuniting with Maura. Pio is a sideline character here, the birth and all that incidental. Having said this, I will also say I am not 'married' or 'invested' in either course of action that I've written. Both were interesting excercises from differing points of view. Please just decide what the story needs and tell me - I will paste the appropriate post into the appropriate box. (Will also be happy to do a complete rewrite in another vein, if that is what is needed) I did remove the posts concerning Pio riding to the Shiriff's, since should it be decided that Pio need to gut the Vala and get out of town, someone else will have to spring Mithadan. [ March 07, 2003: Message edited by: piosenniel ] __________________ Eldest, that’s what I am . . . I knew the dark under the stars when it was fearless - before the Dark Lord came from Outside.