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Joy · 06-18-2002, 03:18 PM

Guys, I'm not sure how to write this, but I'm thinking that the breaking point for Envinyatalis will possibly be – in midst of battle, heavy killing, he hears a newborn crying, mother hiding in brambles holding the baby. – Maybe child is wounded or either mother is close to death.

How does this sound? Would this work? Does this seem too unbelievable?

06-18-2002, 03:18 PM	#18
Joy Spirit of a Warrior Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Wandering Posts: 1,012	Guys, I'm not sure how to write this, but I'm thinking that the breaking point for Envinyatalis will possibly be – in midst of battle, heavy killing, he hears a newborn crying, mother hiding in brambles holding the baby. – Maybe child is wounded or either mother is close to death. How does this sound? Would this work? Does this seem too unbelievable? __________________ God bless, Joy KingdomWarrior@hotmail.com http://kingdomWarrior.jlym.com As the hart panteth after the water brooks, so panteth my soul after thee, O God. My soul thirsteth for God, for the living God: when shall I come and appear before God?