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Morquesse · 09-01-2002, 10:13 PM

Greetings, people! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] I have not posted here in a while, but I am back! And I am actually writing a little bit now, and I have a question: how do you write a bit, like as if the character saw something for a brief moment (or saw something that he did not realize was there), and make where it startles the reader? You know, like a jump scene in a movie?
Thank you, [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]
~M

09-01-2002, 10:13 PM	#11
Morquesse Wight Join Date: May 2002 Location: Past the fields we know.... Posts: 202	Greetings, people! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] I have not posted here in a while, but I am back! And I am actually writing a little bit now, and I have a question: how do you write a bit, like as if the character saw something for a brief moment (or saw something that he did not realize was there), and make where it startles the reader? You know, like a jump scene in a movie? Thank you, [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] ~M __________________ I'm not ashamed to let you know I want this light in me to show. I'm not ashamed to speak the name of Jesus Christ.~Newsboys