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littlemanpoet · 09-02-2002, 11:46 AM

Morquesse: I actually have this in the first chapter of my story. I described the thing from my protagonist's perspective, described a little bit more to explode the first perception, then describe the reality which shocks the protagonist. He expects to see a fish in the water, and it does resemble a fish after a fashion, but turns out to be hair, and beneath the hair is....

09-02-2002, 11:46 AM	#11
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	Morquesse: I actually have this in the first chapter of my story. I described the thing from my protagonist's perspective, described a little bit more to explode the first perception, then describe the reality which shocks the protagonist. He expects to see a fish in the water, and it does resemble a fish after a fashion, but turns out to be hair, and beneath the hair is....