Bloodstained Elanor Planning/Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Orofaniel · 06-06-2004, 09:53 AM

Hello!

This seems like such a great game.

Okay, I had actually worked on an Orc Captain for some time now. Yesterday I sat all morning waiting for the game to open so I could post my character. I left my computer for one hour and when I came back it had opened. Unfortunately, or unfortunate for me, Pio had posted an Orc Captain character for another Player.

Bummer.

Anyway, I decided to just make a new character. So, here is for another Captain; Easterling Captain, Dol Guldur Main forces.

Didn't turn out that well, since I'm still holding on to that Orc Captain thing. Heh. Anyway, I'll give it a try.

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1.) Have you ever played in an RPG at the Barrow Downs? – YES, - Hunt for the Dragon, Flight from Rohan, C&C, Haunted, Breelanders All, Last hope of Moria and I co-owned Setting Sails for Valinor.

2.) How many RPG’s on the Barrow Downs are you currently involved in? None

3.) Have you posted in The Green Dragon Inn? – YES- Long ago though.

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Southron Captain - Dol Guldur Main Forces

NAME: Herding Gratnas

AGE: In his middle thirties

RACE: Haradrim

GENDER: Male

WEAPONS: Almost anything is suitable for this Haradrim. He has the strength and knowledge to handle any weapon that might suit for any occasion. He always carries, however, his bow and sword in battles. They were both stolen from other warriors that were of high rank. His sword is beautifully decorated, and some may think that a sword as powerful in it’s making and as strong as this has nothing to do in a foul man's hands, which is also true in this case. Those markings and decorations that shone brightly from the sword before are hardly seen now. This is caused by the old blood, from his enemies, which still linger in its curves.

His bow is just like any other bow, neither printings nor any form for decoration. The function of the bow is however, remarkable. Even though the shooter may not be of highest quality the bow guarantees a nice and clear shot. With this bow, Herding, has reached many a man and brought them to shadow.

Apart from that, Herding is quite good with his daggers/knives. They are usually easy to use, and they are very reliable.

APPEARANCE: Herding is quite tall and he has a stealth body. His skin is dark like all of his kind. His eyes are hidden beneath his dark eyebrows, and if you are so lucky to notice them at all, you will see nothing but emptiness. Yes, for they are empty indeed. There is no colour whatsoever, and the light and happiness cannot be found within. Apart from that he has strong features in his face; cheekbones high, mouth wide and a black beard. His hair is neither short nor long, all that is certain I that the colour is black as the night itself.

PERSONALITY/STRENGTHS/WEAKNESSES: Herding takes things very seriously. He feels no sympathy with those who fail because they simply are too childish or too naive to see the consequences of their actions. Herding hardly feel any sympathy with anyone but himself. He is of that opinion that people deserve what they get and the other way around. When it comes to himself though, he isn't that cheeky. He hates defeats, whether it's on the battle field or in other circumstances.

Herding is very selfish. He puts himself before others. He is cynical, and everything he does has some sort of thought behind it. Herding knows how to take advantage of people. He has done it ever since he can remember. The result is often good, but it can be devastating, something Herding doesn’t handle very well. Herding always try to find a solution to the problems he meets, but still he want to find a solution that will, if possible, be best for himself even though there are others involved. He doesn’t care as long as he gets it his way. He always waits for the right moment and then he strikes, but of course it is carefully calculated. Herding is quite proud of his own "cleverness", which leads to nothing but humiliations and defeats. This is definitely one of his weaknesses. He is simply too proud and selfish. Even though he is selfish and proud his own kind respects him, part of if because he is a great warrior.

Herding is quite good at hiding his intention towards others. But even though he laughs with others, and not of them, and socializes, there is always something he hides. Apart from that, he loves to watch other people mistakes and then later on use it against them. This man is in other words nothing but trouble and scam, so watch out.

HISTORY: Herding can't really remember much of his past, nor does he care. The only thing he really cares about is the future and the presence and how he is going to take advantage of the people around him. But if there is something to be told about this young man's past then here it is; Herding was always reckoned to be a very clever boy. Already from his childhood he showed sign of great leadership, terrible, but great. He leaned to handle weapons from a young age, and he was good at it. It made him feel strong and unbeatable. He was an only child, and therefore he was used to getting things his way. This has of course, has it's marking today.

The Southron Captain, as he is, is now a part of the Dol Guldur main forces.
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Orofaniel's post

The rays of sun hit Herding in the face. He spit and looked down. His eyes needed some time to get used to the light before he looked up again. It wasn't hard for him to imagine a world without any light, not just a little. The thought was ever tempting, he figured. Maybe it would come too pass? he thought as he got up. He smirked. His hand moved to his forehead and he then removed his yet black hair that was ruining his vision. Now it was clearer.

The sight that met him was the usual; Haradrims. He despised them all, but he knew that they were excellent to use for his own purposes. And since he, himself was a powerful Captain everything was perfectly fine. Although Herding was a cruel man, he was respected by his followers. Well, after all, it was expected of them to respect their Captain. He moved slightly from his spot and he noticed that a Hardarim was now walking towards him. "Captain," he said as he approached him. His face was slightly miss formed (probably from earlier battles), and his voice was harsh and unfriendly. His armour was dirty and slightly too big for him, which made him move slower than usual Men - It wasn’t hard to spot. "Who will lead the force that splits of the main army, sir?" He asked now sounding a bit friendlier than before.

Herding looked at him for a moment. "Koran Cenbryt, will lead them, if I remember correctly," he said stiffly even though he had no difficulties remembering who was going to lead them. His voice inflicted nothing but jealousy. Herding was jealous indeed; he had hoped that he wouldn't have to stick around with these foul men for eternity, but it looked like he would, even though he wanted to or not. "Why do you ask such a question?" Herding asked suspiciously. "No reason, sir," the man said and was about to turn away from Herding. But of course, such an answer wasn't acceptable with Herding. "I want a real answer!" he said sternly and looked at him with great disgust. The sweat from his forehead was now pouring down his face. He used his hand to wipe it away. The man looked astonished by what the Captain had said, since he didn’t mean anything is specific by the question. He kept quiet for a moment.

"We, me and the others in the camp, were just discussing it, that’s all, sir," he forced unwillingly. He was also sweating now. It was probably because of the big armour he was wearing, but Herding wasn't certain. Herding didn't want to discuss the matter anymore so he raised his hand and told the Haradrim that he was free to go. "Thank you sir," he said calmly and bowed.

Herding was left alone again as he watched the Haradrims slowly awakening from their deep sleep.

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Okay, that was it.

Cheers,
Orofaniel

Hama Of The Riddermark · 06-07-2004, 04:20 AM

Not to be picky...but Haradrim are Southrons, not Easterlings. In fact Haradrim means 'people of the south' or so i believe...

It would be helpful to clarify if indeed southrons are present in the dol guldur main forces, or whether they arent...also it strikes me as a little strange that a captain would despise his own people...

Anyhow...I'm not the owner, moderator, co-founder or anything like that...so it isn't my opinion that matters, just asking a few questions...

Orofaniel · 06-07-2004, 07:41 AM

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Not to be picky...but Haradrim are Southrons, not Easterlings. In fact Haradrim means 'people of the south' or so i believe...

Hm..... When I wrote the character profile I was inspired by Aman and Aylwen who used Haradrims as an Easterling Captain/Solider....I don't know how to answer that question, since Herding isn't too willing to tell his "History".

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...also it strikes me as a little strange that a captain would despise his own people...

I did think about that too while I was writing the character profile of Herding. The truth is, that Herding thinks he's better than everyone else, also his own kind. He is too proud to see that he isn't that different from the others. He puts himself above everyone else; part of it because it's him by nature, but also because he's a Captain. He thinks that everyone else is of lower rank, less gifted etc. He doesn’t' realise how similar they are, because if he did realize this he would admit that he hated himself. So, if you look closer, (or maybe I'm just putting too much into it), that quote tells a lot about himself:

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He despised them all...

Herding is very selfish. He puts himself before others. He is cynical

He would rather go around and fool himself than admit something like that.

If you don't approve my character, I'm sorry. But I don't think I'm going to change it until further notice from the Game owner, Pio etc. After all I'm not sure they have seen it. Hope some of your questions regarding Herding has been answered, Hama.

Anyway, Durelin, just tell me if you want me to re-write my character profile.

Cheers,
Orofaniel

Hama Of The Riddermark · 06-07-2004, 09:06 AM

I wasn't saying I disapproved, I was just curious...

piosenniel · 06-07-2004, 01:59 PM

Durelin

How about I just change the word 'Easterling' to 'Southron' in the Charactrers Needed section? Both Aman's and Aylwen's characters are of the Haradrim race, also - and they are supposed to be 'Easterling' militia leaders.

Easterlings would be mostly the Dunlendings, peoples around Rhun, etc.

Sound ok?

~*~ Pio

Durelin · 06-07-2004, 05:36 PM

Pio - If this will mend any controversies that might arise, and it will not effect the characters of either Aman or Aylwen, then this is certainly fine with me. I do not believe that a minor change such as this will effect the game, but, as it mainly effect's their characters, it is really up to Aylwen and Aman.

And please know that I am going over these bios thoroughly, and, unfortunately, rather slowly. I have been doing so in between studying for exams, so I thank you for your patience.

Kransha - Excellently written, and a good, nasty orc character. He fits well in his position and in the game. Very nicely done. Consider yourself a part of the game! The one thing is that I originally had the army gathering away from Dol Guldur, though I like how it was used in your post, and I realize that it is not necessary for the game for the army to assemble elsewhere.

Would it be alright with everyone if we changed the army's starting location once more? *sigh* I know: make up your mind! But trying to deal with some obscue location just isn't necessary. I hope this doesn't require editing for Aman's and Aylwen's posts...?

Firefoot - A very good job, as well. I like your character's personality very much, and his history is relatively well devised. I hope that, as the game unfolds, his good relationship with Calenvása will remain so. Welcome aboard, as well.

Don't panick, Hama Of The Riddermark or The Perky Ent! I am still working on going over your bios. I will get back to you on them soon.

And thank you, Orofaniel, for submitting a bio. I'm very glad you're interested in playing.

*Note to all those who have submitted bios, particularly those already accepted(and already dedicated characters might want to, as well!) - Please go over your bios and first posts again to check for errors. I know I sound very picky, but I believe it is worth the little bit of effort to make things professional! Call me a perfectionist!

-Durelin

Firefoot · 06-07-2004, 06:13 PM

Thanks very much! I am really looking forward to playing in this game.

I have also made one or two very minor changes in my post about the Southrons etc.

06-06-2004, 09:53 AM	#1
Orofaniel Mighty Mouse of Mordor Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Lands of the North, where no man can reach.... Posts: 823	Hello! This seems like such a great game. Okay, I had actually worked on an Orc Captain for some time now. Yesterday I sat all morning waiting for the game to open so I could post my character. I left my computer for one hour and when I came back it had opened. Unfortunately, or unfortunate for me, Pio had posted an Orc Captain character for another Player. Bummer. Anyway, I decided to just make a new character. So, here is for another Captain; Easterling Captain, Dol Guldur Main forces. Didn't turn out that well, since I'm still holding on to that Orc Captain thing. Heh. Anyway, I'll give it a try. _______________________ 1.) Have you ever played in an RPG at the Barrow Downs? – YES, - Hunt for the Dragon, Flight from Rohan, C&C, Haunted, Breelanders All, Last hope of Moria and I co-owned Setting Sails for Valinor. 2.) How many RPG’s on the Barrow Downs are you currently involved in? None 3.) Have you posted in The Green Dragon Inn? – YES- Long ago though. _______________________________________ Southron Captain - Dol Guldur Main Forces NAME: Herding Gratnas AGE: In his middle thirties RACE: Haradrim GENDER: Male WEAPONS: Almost anything is suitable for this Haradrim. He has the strength and knowledge to handle any weapon that might suit for any occasion. He always carries, however, his bow and sword in battles. They were both stolen from other warriors that were of high rank. His sword is beautifully decorated, and some may think that a sword as powerful in it’s making and as strong as this has nothing to do in a foul man's hands, which is also true in this case. Those markings and decorations that shone brightly from the sword before are hardly seen now. This is caused by the old blood, from his enemies, which still linger in its curves. His bow is just like any other bow, neither printings nor any form for decoration. The function of the bow is however, remarkable. Even though the shooter may not be of highest quality the bow guarantees a nice and clear shot. With this bow, Herding, has reached many a man and brought them to shadow. Apart from that, Herding is quite good with his daggers/knives. They are usually easy to use, and they are very reliable. APPEARANCE: Herding is quite tall and he has a stealth body. His skin is dark like all of his kind. His eyes are hidden beneath his dark eyebrows, and if you are so lucky to notice them at all, you will see nothing but emptiness. Yes, for they are empty indeed. There is no colour whatsoever, and the light and happiness cannot be found within. Apart from that he has strong features in his face; cheekbones high, mouth wide and a black beard. His hair is neither short nor long, all that is certain I that the colour is black as the night itself. PERSONALITY/STRENGTHS/WEAKNESSES: Herding takes things very seriously. He feels no sympathy with those who fail because they simply are too childish or too naive to see the consequences of their actions. Herding hardly feel any sympathy with anyone but himself. He is of that opinion that people deserve what they get and the other way around. When it comes to himself though, he isn't that cheeky. He hates defeats, whether it's on the battle field or in other circumstances. Herding is very selfish. He puts himself before others. He is cynical, and everything he does has some sort of thought behind it. Herding knows how to take advantage of people. He has done it ever since he can remember. The result is often good, but it can be devastating, something Herding doesn’t handle very well. Herding always try to find a solution to the problems he meets, but still he want to find a solution that will, if possible, be best for himself even though there are others involved. He doesn’t care as long as he gets it his way. He always waits for the right moment and then he strikes, but of course it is carefully calculated. Herding is quite proud of his own "cleverness", which leads to nothing but humiliations and defeats. This is definitely one of his weaknesses. He is simply too proud and selfish. Even though he is selfish and proud his own kind respects him, part of if because he is a great warrior. Herding is quite good at hiding his intention towards others. But even though he laughs with others, and not of them, and socializes, there is always something he hides. Apart from that, he loves to watch other people mistakes and then later on use it against them. This man is in other words nothing but trouble and scam, so watch out. HISTORY: Herding can't really remember much of his past, nor does he care. The only thing he really cares about is the future and the presence and how he is going to take advantage of the people around him. But if there is something to be told about this young man's past then here it is; Herding was always reckoned to be a very clever boy. Already from his childhood he showed sign of great leadership, terrible, but great. He leaned to handle weapons from a young age, and he was good at it. It made him feel strong and unbeatable. He was an only child, and therefore he was used to getting things his way. This has of course, has it's marking today. The Southron Captain, as he is, is now a part of the Dol Guldur main forces. __________________________________ Orofaniel's post The rays of sun hit Herding in the face. He spit and looked down. His eyes needed some time to get used to the light before he looked up again. It wasn't hard for him to imagine a world without any light, not just a little. The thought was ever tempting, he figured. Maybe it would come too pass? he thought as he got up. He smirked. His hand moved to his forehead and he then removed his yet black hair that was ruining his vision. Now it was clearer. The sight that met him was the usual; Haradrims. He despised them all, but he knew that they were excellent to use for his own purposes. And since he, himself was a powerful Captain everything was perfectly fine. Although Herding was a cruel man, he was respected by his followers. Well, after all, it was expected of them to respect their Captain. He moved slightly from his spot and he noticed that a Hardarim was now walking towards him. "Captain," he said as he approached him. His face was slightly miss formed (probably from earlier battles), and his voice was harsh and unfriendly. His armour was dirty and slightly too big for him, which made him move slower than usual Men - It wasn’t hard to spot. "Who will lead the force that splits of the main army, sir?" He asked now sounding a bit friendlier than before. Herding looked at him for a moment. "Koran Cenbryt, will lead them, if I remember correctly," he said stiffly even though he had no difficulties remembering who was going to lead them. His voice inflicted nothing but jealousy. Herding was jealous indeed; he had hoped that he wouldn't have to stick around with these foul men for eternity, but it looked like he would, even though he wanted to or not. "Why do you ask such a question?" Herding asked suspiciously. "No reason, sir," the man said and was about to turn away from Herding. But of course, such an answer wasn't acceptable with Herding. "I want a real answer!" he said sternly and looked at him with great disgust. The sweat from his forehead was now pouring down his face. He used his hand to wipe it away. The man looked astonished by what the Captain had said, since he didn’t mean anything is specific by the question. He kept quiet for a moment. "We, me and the others in the camp, were just discussing it, that’s all, sir," he forced unwillingly. He was also sweating now. It was probably because of the big armour he was wearing, but Herding wasn't certain. Herding didn't want to discuss the matter anymore so he raised his hand and told the Haradrim that he was free to go. "Thank you sir," he said calmly and bowed. Herding was left alone again as he watched the Haradrims slowly awakening from their deep sleep. __________________ Okay, that was it. Cheers, Orofaniel __________________ I lost my old sig...somehow....screams and shouts ..............What is this?- Now isn't this fun? >_< .....and yes, the jumping mouse is my new avatar. ^_^ Last edited by piosenniel; 06-09-2004 at 09:36 AM.

06-07-2004, 01:59 PM	#5
piosenniel Desultory Dwimmerlaik Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat..... Posts: 7,779	Durelin How about I just change the word 'Easterling' to 'Southron' in the Charactrers Needed section? Both Aman's and Aylwen's characters are of the Haradrim race, also - and they are supposed to be 'Easterling' militia leaders. Easterlings would be mostly the Dunlendings, peoples around Rhun, etc. Sound ok? ~*~ Pio __________________ Eldest, that’s what I am . . . I knew the dark under the stars when it was fearless - before the Dark Lord came from Outside.

06-07-2004, 05:36 PM	#6
Durelin Estelo dagnir, Melo ring Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 3,063	Pio - If this will mend any controversies that might arise, and it will not effect the characters of either Aman or Aylwen, then this is certainly fine with me. I do not believe that a minor change such as this will effect the game, but, as it mainly effect's their characters, it is really up to Aylwen and Aman. And please know that I am going over these bios thoroughly, and, unfortunately, rather slowly. I have been doing so in between studying for exams, so I thank you for your patience. Kransha - Excellently written, and a good, nasty orc character. He fits well in his position and in the game. Very nicely done. Consider yourself a part of the game! The one thing is that I originally had the army gathering away from Dol Guldur, though I like how it was used in your post, and I realize that it is not necessary for the game for the army to assemble elsewhere. Would it be alright with everyone if we changed the army's starting location once more? sigh I know: make up your mind! But trying to deal with some obscue location just isn't necessary. I hope this doesn't require editing for Aman's and Aylwen's posts...? Firefoot - A very good job, as well. I like your character's personality very much, and his history is relatively well devised. I hope that, as the game unfolds, his good relationship with Calenvása will remain so. Welcome aboard, as well. Don't panick, Hama Of The Riddermark or The Perky Ent! I am still working on going over your bios. I will get back to you on them soon. And thank you, Orofaniel, for submitting a bio. I'm very glad you're interested in playing. Note to all those who have submitted bios, particularly those already accepted(and already dedicated characters might want to, as well!) - Please go over your bios and first posts again to check for errors. I know I sound very picky, but I believe it is worth the little bit of effort to make things professional! Call me a perfectionist! -Durelin Last edited by Durelin; 06-07-2004 at 07:09 PM.*

06-07-2004, 04:20 AM	#2
Hama Of The Riddermark Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 282	Not to be picky...but Haradrim are Southrons, not Easterlings. In fact Haradrim means 'people of the south' or so i believe... It would be helpful to clarify if indeed southrons are present in the dol guldur main forces, or whether they arent...also it strikes me as a little strange that a captain would despise his own people... Anyhow...I'm not the owner, moderator, co-founder or anything like that...so it isn't my opinion that matters, just asking a few questions...

06-07-2004, 09:06 AM	#4
Hama Of The Riddermark Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 282	I wasn't saying I disapproved, I was just curious...

06-07-2004, 06:13 PM	#7
Firefoot Illusionary Holbytla Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,547	Thanks very much! I am really looking forward to playing in this game. I have also made one or two very minor changes in my post about the Southrons etc.