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View Poll Results: What do you think about the principle of 'ReVersing' | |||
Great! Keep it up! The poetry of the kind has an independent value, it deserves a book all to itself! |
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8 | 40.00% |
Good! It is re-creative in a sense it lives opon other’s work, but good application of one’s creative abilities nevertheless. Just don’t expect much from it |
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11 | 55.00% |
Indifferent. Really, it’s desultory. Have fun if you like, I don’t care, but stop forcing your megalomaniac ramblings on me! |
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1 | 5.00% |
Horrible! How dared you to deal with Tolkien in such an insulting way! Don’t even think about ReVersing another piece of rhyme! |
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0 | 0% |
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Deadnight Chanter
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Mewlips
The shadows where the Mewlips dwell
Are dark and wet as ink, And slow and softly rings their bell, As in the slime you sink. You sink into the slime, who dare To knock upon their door, While down the grinning gargoyles stare And noisome waters pour. Beside the rotting river-strand The drooping willows weep, And gloomily the gorcrows stand Croaking in their sleep. Over the Merlock Mountains a long and weary way, In a mouldy valley where the trees are grey, By a dark pool's borders without wind or tide, Moonless and sunless, the Mewlips hide. The cellars where the Mewlips sit Are deep and dank and cold With single sickly candle lit; And there they count their gold. Their walls are wet, their ceilings drip; Their feet upon the floor Go softly with a squish-flap-flip, As they sidle to the door. They peep out slyly; through a crack Their feeling fingers creep, And when they've finished, in a sack Your bones they lake to keep. Beyond the Merlock Mountains, a long and lonely road. Through the spider-shadows and the marsh of Tode, And through the wood of hanging trees and the gallows-weed, You go to find the Mewlips — and the Mewlips feed ********************************** The shining shore where Moofeet go Is pearly-pale like milk There swift and loud pipes they blow And soft is sand like silk The flowers pop up from the turf The windows shine with light And waves are gentle with the surf As shore they kiss by night The lofty pine there stands on cliff To face the salty breeze And seagulls proud crowd the reef Or master wind with ease Down to Shallow Islet swift and winding path Turns and writhes through, springs and leaps a-rath On the shores of foamy surf, under starry sky Harking to the wash on-shore, there the Moofeet lie The halls by sea where Moofeet stall Are full of golden shine With lamps and torches on the walls And merry guests to dine Their windows wide and floors of sand All round adorned with webs All sing and dance on sea and land When one shows out its neb They rush and run, their gates are high They stamp their hooves and bark And when they’ll whistle, far and nigh All foes will flee to lurk Up from Shallow Islet swift and joyful way Turns and writhes through and no one goes astray To the shores of foamy surf, under starry dome Merry will the feast be there, where’s the Moofoot’s home.
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Deadnight Chanter
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The Cat
The fat cat on the mat
may seem to dream of nice mice that suffice for him, or cream; but he free, maybe, walks in thought unbowed, proud, where loud roared and fought his kin, lean and slim, or deep in den in the East feasted on beasts and tender men. The giant lion with iron claw in paw, and huge ruthless tooth in gory jaw; the paid dark-starred, fleet upon feet, that oft soft from aloft leaps on his meat where woods loom in gloom- far now they be, fierce and free, and tamed is he; but fat cat on the mat kept as a pet, he does not forget. ********************************* Though mice feed on rice And may look for a nook For the paw to go And the hook to rook But they fly on high In their dreams To the dark to hark Silent screams To where bats knit and tat Or upside on the bough In angle tangle go dangle Leather wings to sough Trough the air with dare Glide and slide Hunting moth and bug Pip and gride Up and down they yaw Eat no seed Things they are on wings Not on feet! Where twig'n'leaf no reef For them ever form Though their home be worm And by day they dorm Though they feed on rice Kept in barn, still mice Dream of flight by night!
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Egroeg Ihkhsal - Would you believe in the love at first sight? - Yes I'm certain that it happens all the time! Last edited by HerenIstarion; 11-11-2004 at 03:43 AM. Reason: punctuation |
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Animated Skeleton
Join Date: Jun 2004
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all very interesting...
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Then down the warrior tumbled/a long and weary way/ 'till at last he rested soundly/ among the water below/ bested by the darkness |
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Pilgrim Soul
Join Date: May 2004
Location: watching the wonga-wonga birds circle...
Posts: 9,460
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I'll get back to you...
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“But Finrod walks with Finarfin his father beneath the trees in Eldamar.”
Christopher Tolkien, Requiescat in pace |
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Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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I've got one in the works at the moment...but am suffering from a severe lack of creativity...so it may be awhile.
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Pilgrim Soul
Join Date: May 2004
Location: watching the wonga-wonga birds circle...
Posts: 9,460
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Bilbo's last song
Day is ended, dim my eyes, but journey long before me lies. Farewell, friends! I hear the call. The ship's beside the stony wall. Foam is white and waves are grey; beyond the sunset leads my way. Foam is salt, the wind is free; I hear the rising of the Sea. Farewell, friends! The sails are set, the wind is east, the moorings fret. Shadows long before me lie, beneath the ever-bending sky, but islands lie behind the Sun that I shall raise ere all is done; lands there are to west of West, where night is quiet and sleep is rest. Guided by the Lonely Star, beyond the utmost harbour-bar, I'll find the heavens fair and free, and beaches of the Starlit Sea. Ship, my ship! I seek the West, and fields and mountains ever blest. Farewell to Middle-earth at last. I see the Star above your mast! -- J. R. R. Tolkien A work in progress - I will try to complete tonight... but here is the first half... I hate myself for this - I love this poem and now I have twisted it's beautiful theme to tell of a journey to satisfy carnal pleasure rather than to heal a wounded soul.... Ah well Day is dawning, tired my eyes but long-haul flight before me lies. Come on friends! I hear the call - We must reach the departure hall. The lights are bright , the decor grey; We'll do some shopping on the way - Booze and fags from "Duty Free": I hear the tannoy calling me! Come on friends! Rush to the jet - board before the stewards fret! Hours long before me lie Jammed in a tin-can in the sky! But islands lie beneath the sun Where we shall land ere day is done.... to be concluded - I hope...
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“But Finrod walks with Finarfin his father beneath the trees in Eldamar.”
Christopher Tolkien, Requiescat in pace Last edited by Mithalwen; 08-06-2004 at 12:37 PM. Reason: typo |
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Deadnight Chanter
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Oliphaunt
Grey as a mouse,
Big as a house, Nose like a snake, I make the earth shake, As I tramp through the grass; Trees crack as I pass. With horns in my mouth I walk in the South, Flapping big ears. Beyond count of years I stump round and round, Never lie on the ground, Not even to die. Oliphaunt am I, Biggest of all, Huge, old, and tall. If ever you'd met me, You wouldn't forget me. If you never do, You won't think I'm true; But old Oliphaunt am I. And I never lie. *** He’s blue as the sea Belly vast as a lea Tail like a hose He makes the sky doze As he dives to the deep To take his nap of sleep With scales on his back To the North is his tack Beady black eye Lung of mighty sigh Seething back and forth Making water froth Never comes ashore The whale of ole’ lore! Mighty and wise One of awful size In the waves to play While all sailors pray ‘May he turn aside’ ‘Hark! his teeth a-gride’ But he knows his lore Not to come ashore!
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