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View Poll Results: What do you think about the principle of 'ReVersing' | |||
Great! Keep it up! The poetry of the kind has an independent value, it deserves a book all to itself! |
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8 | 40.00% |
Good! It is re-creative in a sense it lives opon other’s work, but good application of one’s creative abilities nevertheless. Just don’t expect much from it |
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11 | 55.00% |
Indifferent. Really, it’s desultory. Have fun if you like, I don’t care, but stop forcing your megalomaniac ramblings on me! |
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1 | 5.00% |
Horrible! How dared you to deal with Tolkien in such an insulting way! Don’t even think about ReVersing another piece of rhyme! |
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0 | 0% |
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Deadnight Chanter
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The Cat
The fat cat on the mat
may seem to dream of nice mice that suffice for him, or cream; but he free, maybe, walks in thought unbowed, proud, where loud roared and fought his kin, lean and slim, or deep in den in the East feasted on beasts and tender men. The giant lion with iron claw in paw, and huge ruthless tooth in gory jaw; the paid dark-starred, fleet upon feet, that oft soft from aloft leaps on his meat where woods loom in gloom- far now they be, fierce and free, and tamed is he; but fat cat on the mat kept as a pet, he does not forget. ********************************* Though mice feed on rice And may look for a nook For the paw to go And the hook to rook But they fly on high In their dreams To the dark to hark Silent screams To where bats knit and tat Or upside on the bough In angle tangle go dangle Leather wings to sough Trough the air with dare Glide and slide Hunting moth and bug Pip and gride Up and down they yaw Eat no seed Things they are on wings Not on feet! Where twig'n'leaf no reef For them ever form Though their home be worm And by day they dorm Though they feed on rice Kept in barn, still mice Dream of flight by night!
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Egroeg Ihkhsal - Would you believe in the love at first sight? - Yes I'm certain that it happens all the time! Last edited by HerenIstarion; 11-11-2004 at 03:43 AM. Reason: punctuation |
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