The poem of Gil-Galad - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Boromir88 · 09-09-2004, 01:23 PM

First, I will comment about the original Gil-galad poem. Anytime I get to the "His sword was long, his lance was keen, his shinging helm afar was seen..." I just want to sing it in the Gulligan Island's theme song, well the beat of the theme song.

Anyway, on you poem NightKnight, I actually think it was well done, and some of the phrases you use like "deadly lance, That many orcs upon did glance" and "His helmet bright and shield with stars, Protected him from many scars," add sort of a little comedy into the poem.

09-09-2004, 01:23 PM	#2
Boromir88 Laconic Loreman Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: USA Posts: 7,522	Very likeable... First, I will comment about the original Gil-galad poem. Anytime I get to the "His sword was long, his lance was keen, his shinging helm afar was seen..." I just want to sing it in the Gulligan Island's theme song, well the beat of the theme song. Anyway, on you poem NightKnight, I actually think it was well done, and some of the phrases you use like "deadly lance, That many orcs upon did glance" and "His helmet bright and shield with stars, Protected him from many scars," add sort of a little comedy into the poem.