Sailing Away Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Child of the 7th Age · 01-22-2005, 11:47 AM

Crystal

I hope you feel better soon!

Kitanna -

Good post! But I am wondering if we don't need to shift it back a bit. Firefoot has a post right before yours where we are plummetting down the river. Your own post ends before the raft gets started.

Firefoot and/or Kitanna - What if Pio or I cut and pasted this at the end of Encaitare's last post? Chronologically, Kitanna's post would seem to fit better there.

Cami

Firefoot · 01-22-2005, 02:46 PM

Okay, here's the deal. I moved my post so that Kitanna's is before mine. I think this makes sense since Kitanna does mention how Sondo and Reggie caught some fish.

However, Kitanna, it would have already started to drizzle at the end of your post. Not pour, just chilly, wet drizzling. If you could change that then I think everything would be correct, chronologically and otherwise.

Boromir88 · 01-22-2005, 04:10 PM

Crystal, don't be ashamed, we're just glad it wasn't worse.

Child of the 7th Age · 01-22-2005, 06:34 PM

Thanks, Firefoot . That works much better than my earlier suggestion in view of the fish.... It just didn't seem to fit in at the very end.

Kitanna · 01-22-2005, 07:34 PM

I should have put my post here and asked to have someone put it in where it fit, but I didn't even think about that. So sorry.

Child of the 7th Age · 01-22-2005, 11:23 PM

Kitanna -

No need to apologize! It wasn't a clear cut thing at all. Plus, the give and take is part of the game.

Everyone -

We're close to 'lunchtime', only I'm not at all certain if Sondo is prepared to stop the raft. In any case, Bingo is feeling rather queasy, what with the raft bobbing up and down.

Cami

Primrose Bolger · 01-23-2005, 02:17 AM

Well, Sassy tried to help . . .

The raft is mainly out of control and the poles that were used to push and steer the raft seem to have fallen in the river.

Poor Bingo, I'm sure he's thrown up by now.

I wouldn't be surprised if they just pushed the 'bad luck' girl into the river.

01-22-2005, 11:47 AM	#1
Child of the 7th Age Spirit of the Lonely Star Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 5,133	Crystal I hope you feel better soon! Kitanna - Good post! But I am wondering if we don't need to shift it back a bit. Firefoot has a post right before yours where we are plummetting down the river. Your own post ends before the raft gets started. Firefoot and/or Kitanna - What if Pio or I cut and pasted this at the end of Encaitare's last post? Chronologically, Kitanna's post would seem to fit better there. Cami __________________ Multitasking women are never too busy to vote.

01-22-2005, 06:34 PM	#4
Child of the 7th Age Spirit of the Lonely Star Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 5,133	Thanks, Firefoot . That works much better than my earlier suggestion in view of the fish.... It just didn't seem to fit in at the very end. __________________ Multitasking women are never too busy to vote. Last edited by Child of the 7th Age; 01-22-2005 at 06:44 PM.

01-22-2005, 07:34 PM	#5
Kitanna Child of the West Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Watching President Fillmore ride a unicorn Posts: 2,132	I should have put my post here and asked to have someone put it in where it fit, but I didn't even think about that. So sorry. __________________ "Let us live so that when we come to die even the undertaker will be sorry." - Mark Twain

01-22-2005, 11:23 PM	#6
Child of the 7th Age Spirit of the Lonely Star Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 5,133	Kitanna - No need to apologize! It wasn't a clear cut thing at all. Plus, the give and take is part of the game. Everyone - We're close to 'lunchtime', only I'm not at all certain if Sondo is prepared to stop the raft. In any case, Bingo is feeling rather queasy, what with the raft bobbing up and down. Cami __________________ Multitasking women are never too busy to vote.

01-23-2005, 02:17 AM	#7
Primrose Bolger Wight Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Near Bywater Pool Posts: 196	Well, Sassy tried to help . . . The raft is mainly out of control and the poles that were used to push and steer the raft seem to have fallen in the river. Poor Bingo, I'm sure he's thrown up by now. I wouldn't be surprised if they just pushed the 'bad luck' girl into the river. __________________ . . . for they love peace and quiet and good tilled earth . . . are quick of hearing and sharpeyed, and though they are inclined to be fat and do not hurry unneccesarily, they are nonetheless nimble and deft in their movements . . . FOTR - Prologue

01-22-2005, 02:46 PM	#2
Firefoot Illusionary Holbytla Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,547	Okay, here's the deal. I moved my post so that Kitanna's is before mine. I think this makes sense since Kitanna does mention how Sondo and Reggie caught some fish. However, Kitanna, it would have already started to drizzle at the end of your post. Not pour, just chilly, wet drizzling. If you could change that then I think everything would be correct, chronologically and otherwise.

01-22-2005, 04:10 PM	#3
Boromir88 Laconic Loreman Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: USA Posts: 7,521	Crystal, don't be ashamed, we're just glad it wasn't worse.