Prisoner of Númenor Planning/Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Feanor of the Peredhil · 11-13-2005, 05:08 PM

Okeydokey.

Feanor of the Peredhil · 11-13-2005, 06:42 PM

I've run into an entirely unexpected snag. I generally compose off the cuff, but I've tried my hand at composing a death scene in advance and I absolutely hate it. I'll admit that it isn't bad, but it isn't right. I can't seem to do the death the justice that it deserves. Any tips? How can I do this better?

littlemanpoet · 11-13-2005, 07:41 PM

I guess I can't really help until you post it here on the discussion thread.

11-13-2005, 05:08 PM	#1
Feanor of the Peredhil La Belle Dame sans Merci Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: perpetual uncertainty Posts: 5,517	Okeydokey. __________________ peace

11-13-2005, 06:42 PM	#2
Feanor of the Peredhil La Belle Dame sans Merci Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: perpetual uncertainty Posts: 5,517	I've run into an entirely unexpected snag. I generally compose off the cuff, but I've tried my hand at composing a death scene in advance and I absolutely hate it. I'll admit that it isn't bad, but it isn't right. I can't seem to do the death the justice that it deserves. Any tips? How can I do this better? __________________ peace

11-13-2005, 07:41 PM	#3
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	I guess I can't really help until you post it here on the discussion thread.