Outracing the Flames Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Farael · 02-20-2006, 12:05 AM

Well, up went my post and off I go soon. I would REALLY appreciate some help with my first paragraph though, there is something wrong with it and I can't put my finger on what it may be.

Also, something I forgot to ask on my last post:
Arry, is it OK if two (or more) of us PM each other to prepare a surprise for the rest of the group? and if we do, should we keep you in the loop?

Arry · 02-20-2006, 12:34 AM

Farael

Yes, you should definitiely be keeping me in the loop.

and . . . I don't really see anything wrong with the paragraph you were talking about.

-- Arry

Farael · 02-20-2006, 12:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Arry

Farael

Yes, you should definitiely be keeping me in the loop.

and . . . I don't really see anything wrong with the paragraph you were talking about.

-- Arry

We are all a bunch of owls, are we not? I was not expecting answers until tomorrow.... but then, I think you are an hour or two behind me.

Now, does your answer mean that we can plot 'secretly' as long as you are informed?

And also, about my paragraph... it just doesn't seem to flow properly, I don't know... it's probably gramatically correct but I don't find it smooth enough.

Arry · 02-20-2006, 12:56 AM

I need the basic outline of your surprise - you and whoever else is in on the planning can handle the details.

-- Arry

Tevildo · 02-20-2006, 03:15 AM

Save filled.

I certainly hope Brand is close behind on that trail, or Dorran will be toast....

You just can't trust those cats one bit!

Maeggaladiel · 02-20-2006, 02:55 PM

Whew! I'm back. Sorry I was offline all weekend; things are getting busy.

Yeah, I realize Fionn is kind of a stereotypical naieve hero-type, and I'm hoping I can kind of flesh his character out a little bit over the course of the game. Not quite sure how I'll do that, but I'm considering it.

Undómë · 02-20-2006, 05:04 PM

Will it be alright with the Bregowarians if I write a post to get us to late night - so that Nogrod can come on board?

02-20-2006, 12:05 AM	#1
Farael Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: In hospitals, call rooms and (rarely) my apartment. Posts: 1,538	Well, up went my post and off I go soon. I would REALLY appreciate some help with my first paragraph though, there is something wrong with it and I can't put my finger on what it may be. Also, something I forgot to ask on my last post: Arry, is it OK if two (or more) of us PM each other to prepare a surprise for the rest of the group? and if we do, should we keep you in the loop? __________________ I prepared Explosive Runes this morning.

02-20-2006, 12:34 AM	#2
Arry Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 704	Farael Yes, you should definitiely be keeping me in the loop. and . . . I don't really see anything wrong with the paragraph you were talking about. -- Arry __________________ If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world – J.R.R. Tolkien

02-20-2006, 12:56 AM	#4
Arry Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 704	I need the basic outline of your surprise - you and whoever else is in on the planning can handle the details. -- Arry __________________ If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world – J.R.R. Tolkien

02-20-2006, 03:15 AM	#5
Tevildo Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Curled up on Melko's lap Posts: 425	Save filled. I certainly hope Brand is close behind on that trail, or Dorran will be toast.... You just can't trust those cats one bit! __________________ Now Tevildo was a mighty cat--the mightiest of all--and possessed of an evil spirit,...and he was in Melko's constant following; and that cat had all cats subject to him, and he and his subjects were the chasers and getters of meat for Melko's table. Last edited by Tevildo; 02-20-2006 at 03:22 AM.

02-20-2006, 02:55 PM	#6
Maeggaladiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: The end of the world as we know it. I feel fine, incidentally. Posts: 500	Whew! I'm back. Sorry I was offline all weekend; things are getting busy. Yeah, I realize Fionn is kind of a stereotypical naieve hero-type, and I'm hoping I can kind of flesh his character out a little bit over the course of the game. Not quite sure how I'll do that, but I'm considering it. __________________ "Wide ne bith wel," cwaeth se the geheirde on helle hriman.

02-20-2006, 05:04 PM	#7
Undómë Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 400	Will it be alright with the Bregowarians if I write a post to get us to late night - so that Nogrod can come on board? __________________ Young she was and yet not so. The braids of her dark hair were touched by no frost, her white arms and clear face were flawless and smooth, and the light of stars was in her bright eyes, grey as a cloudless night . . .