Abduction in Edoras Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

JennyHallu · 05-10-2006, 01:29 PM

Saeryn is here, but Fea is dealing with time constraints limiting her posting. That's why Degas and the boys are cameos and not full roles. I should think you could take Fea's offer into account in whatever post you write as coming from Saeryn's voice, (that ok, Fea?) just don't expect a response from her.

Celuien · 05-10-2006, 01:48 PM

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Originally Posted by JennyHallu

Saeryn is here, but Fea is dealing with time constraints limiting her posting. That's why Degas and the boys are cameos and not full roles. I should think you could take Fea's offer into account in whatever post you write as coming from Saeryn's voice, (that ok, Fea?) just don't expect a response from her.

So noted.

Feanor of the Peredhil · 05-10-2006, 02:02 PM

Precisely, and thanks Jenny for clarifying for me.

Anguirel · 05-11-2006, 07:31 AM

I hadn't thought about it before I starting writing him, but Gurth's sparce vocabulary means that posts concerning him containing dialogue will often lead to me having to NPC other people's characters to an extent.

So in this case, Jenny, Firefoot and Taralphiel, do speak up if you feel I haven't done your characters justice. For instance, I might have slightly played down Scyld's courage for comic effect.

Firefoot · 05-11-2006, 02:40 PM

I think the only thing that I really mind is the part at the end about Scyld retreating "as quickly as possible." Him getting out of there like that is fine, but I think I'd make it a little slower, more guarded. Other than that, looks fine. Scyld is still developing for me, and I'm definitely liking this exasperation with Gurth.

Anguirel · 05-11-2006, 02:49 PM

I changed it to "paced slowly but firmly back up the stairs".

Firefoot · 05-11-2006, 02:53 PM

Perfect.

05-10-2006, 01:29 PM	#1
JennyHallu The Pearl, The Lily Maid Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In my luxury Barrow, snuggled up in a pile of satin pillows, eating fresh fruit. Posts: 1,628	Saeryn is here, but Fea is dealing with time constraints limiting her posting. That's why Degas and the boys are cameos and not full roles. I should think you could take Fea's offer into account in whatever post you write as coming from Saeryn's voice, (that ok, Fea?) just don't expect a response from her. __________________ <=== Lookee, lookee, lots of IM handles!

05-10-2006, 02:02 PM	#3
Feanor of the Peredhil La Belle Dame sans Merci Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: perpetual uncertainty Posts: 5,517	Precisely, and thanks Jenny for clarifying for me. __________________ peace

05-11-2006, 07:31 AM	#4
Anguirel Byronic Brand Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: The 1590s Posts: 2,778	I hadn't thought about it before I starting writing him, but Gurth's sparce vocabulary means that posts concerning him containing dialogue will often lead to me having to NPC other people's characters to an extent. So in this case, Jenny, Firefoot and Taralphiel, do speak up if you feel I haven't done your characters justice. For instance, I might have slightly played down Scyld's courage for comic effect. __________________ Among the friendly dead, being bad at games did not seem to matter -Il Lupo Fenriso

05-11-2006, 02:49 PM	#6
Anguirel Byronic Brand Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: The 1590s Posts: 2,778	I changed it to "paced slowly but firmly back up the stairs". __________________ Among the friendly dead, being bad at games did not seem to matter -Il Lupo Fenriso

05-11-2006, 02:40 PM	#5
Firefoot Illusionary Holbytla Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,547	I think the only thing that I really mind is the part at the end about Scyld retreating "as quickly as possible." Him getting out of there like that is fine, but I think I'd make it a little slower, more guarded. Other than that, looks fine. Scyld is still developing for me, and I'm definitely liking this exasperation with Gurth.

05-11-2006, 02:53 PM	#7
Firefoot Illusionary Holbytla Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,547	Perfect.