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Mighty Mouse of Mordor
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Pio- I won't be travelling anywhere. =P So I'll have internet access.
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Flame of the Ainulindalë
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Back again...
Gwerr seemed easier to get back on track. I'll have to think about Hadith for a while, but I'll try to bring him also to the scene today. Things seem to have started unfolding. Great!
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Flame of the Ainulindalë
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A question about the slaves
How many weapons the slaves do actually possess (about how many)? If the 15 ex-slaves would all have had four blades each as Shae had, there would almost be one for everyone! But paying heed to the beginning of the story and to the overall "believability", I can't see that as a right solution... So is there a wealth of blades (or bows or the like) to actually distribute more evenly, or are we really having a shortage of weapons? I would think the latter option to be more realistic, but what do you think?
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Flame of the Ainulindalë
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Durelin: As I PM'd you about my intentions, I totally forgot to inquire you about your stance on the way I used Khamir. So just please let me know if something was out of character with him...
Slaves: I seem to be filling our ranks, but well, that's my way in this kind of situation, it seems... I'll promise not to write too many characters more into our tale. But just to sum up, I have included in the slave-gallery the following personalities... Beloan: Khamir's "right hand" (Which one hand it was that Khamir was missing? ![]() Khala and Cuáran: older ladies from the barracks, they used to take care of Hadith and any other younger people when needed. Good-hearted and streetwise of sorts. Reserved and practical. Will not come to the fore but will handle things at the down to earth manner they have on things. Fewerth: a band leader of sorts, slimy and opportunistic thirty or something, ready to gain from any others misfortune with bullying, private trading or blackmailing. Joshwan and Guilledean: Fewerth's "friends" or mates. The ones trying to gain the most of their patron's successes. Not trusting anyone but themselves who form a gang inside the slave-escapees. Please use these characters as you wish with these general guidelines to begin with. Surely no one knows, what will come of them...
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Estelo dagnir, Melo ring
Join Date: Oct 2002
Posts: 3,063
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I'd say there is both a shortage of weapons and a shortage of patience.
![]() Khamir only has his knives, Shae hers, a few others would have perhaps a bow and a knife...really, it is probable that each person in the gang has more than one weapon. Whether or not they'd give up something they've learned to depend on to someone they don't particularly have the patience for is another matter. Perhaps if this slave group was run a bit differently, there would be enough weapons for most of the able-bodied men and/or women and to have a weapon. But whether or not anyone would realize that is different, too. The gang doesn't sit around polishing their shiny weapons all the time...or at least not very often. ![]() And how you used Khamir in your post is quite fine, Nogrod. And thanks for setting up the situation! Shall be quite interesting. Pio - I enjoyed your post...and will enjoy responding to it! |
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Shade of Carn Dûm
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Curled up on Melko's lap
Posts: 425
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Folwren -
Here is the revised post. The changes are the ones you suggested at the end. Please let me know if there are any problems with this. I've sent you a pm about the eyes through the grate. I won't post again for Azhar until I hear from you.
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Spirit of the Lonely Star
Join Date: Mar 2002
Posts: 5,133
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I've put up a save to get the fellowship out of camp and a good way along the road. If anyone needs to say something more before we leave camp, just post it on the discussion thread and I'll add it to the beginning of my save.
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