BL-EX-18.3: Ah, I understand now. I agree that "holding it out" should go.
BL-EX-18.7: This looks good to me.
I've been working on some of the spots that remain problematic, but without much success so far. I did come up with something for BL-EX-10, though it still needs some work:
Quote:
But Felagund spoke ere he bade farewell:
‘This I say to Celegorm the fell,
by the sight that is given me in this hour,
by neither thine nor any power
shall thy kin the Silmarils gain
before the End; all in vain
is your oath. And this we seek
shall be delivered ’neath the triple peak,
but never to your hands shall fall.
Nay, your oath shall devour all
of Feanor’s sons, and to other care
Luthien’s great bride-price bear.’
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10-29-2006, 05:00 PM
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