Abduction in Edoras Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Firefoot · 11-05-2006, 01:41 PM

I made some edits to my last post; is that better? Or is it still too much of a stretch?

I'm thinking that when Haleth saw them, he was only really considering them as guests to the Hall; suspicion didn't come till after that, so when he first saw them there would not have been much reason for him to pay attention to them.

JennyHallu · 11-05-2006, 04:32 PM

K, thanks...I'll go read the edits you made.

EDIT: That'll work great. Thanks. Too bad he'll never realize his mistake...(insert evil laughter here)

JennyHallu · 11-06-2006, 01:53 PM

Beautiful Tara! Now I think we're back to Firefoot and Haleth, while Garstan and Eodwine go back down toward the estate's front door (and not the inner courtyard where the current action occurs).

11-05-2006, 04:32 PM	#2
JennyHallu The Pearl, The Lily Maid Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In my luxury Barrow, snuggled up in a pile of satin pillows, eating fresh fruit. Posts: 1,628	K, thanks...I'll go read the edits you made. EDIT: That'll work great. Thanks. Too bad he'll never realize his mistake...(insert evil laughter here) __________________ <=== Lookee, lookee, lots of IM handles!

11-06-2006, 01:53 PM	#3
JennyHallu The Pearl, The Lily Maid Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In my luxury Barrow, snuggled up in a pile of satin pillows, eating fresh fruit. Posts: 1,628	Beautiful Tara! Now I think we're back to Firefoot and Haleth, while Garstan and Eodwine go back down toward the estate's front door (and not the inner courtyard where the current action occurs). __________________ <=== Lookee, lookee, lots of IM handles!

11-05-2006, 01:41 PM	#1
Firefoot Illusionary Holbytla Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,547	I made some edits to my last post; is that better? Or is it still too much of a stretch? I'm thinking that when Haleth saw them, he was only really considering them as guests to the Hall; suspicion didn't come till after that, so when he first saw them there would not have been much reason for him to pay attention to them.