Abduction in Edoras Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

littlemanpoet · 12-02-2006, 12:11 PM

Good.

Taralphiel · 12-02-2006, 10:28 PM

Here is my attempt to salvage the post I've been struggling with. I have every idea that some changes wil be needed, so please point them out. Hopefully I got the direction/timing/wording in some sort of neat order.

Also, Ang, please let me know if I should make changes to Gurth's parts.

If people wish to have Sorn spotted and chased after, I have no problems. I suppose I'd like him to have some sort of lead so his story can play out. But I'm more than willing to think up some more ideas.

- Tara

littlemanpoet · 12-02-2006, 10:56 PM

I think it's great! Good writing! Your struggles seem to have paid off.

Taralphiel · 12-03-2006, 12:16 AM

You have my thanks for a good idea, Elempi. It got the writing block un-stuck, so to speak

- Tara

littlemanpoet · 12-03-2006, 08:15 PM

Much welcomes!

I'm glad it helped.

Taralphiel · 12-04-2006, 05:28 AM

Great posts! Wow, this is getting so exciting!

I figure if I balance my lunch hour well tomorrow I can hand-write some notes for my next post

Taking into account the planning below, I'll be able to flesh something out in the next couple of days...

I'll have Sorn hear the shouts of Eodwine, take off up the hill and confront Scyld.

This is an idea I'd like to throw out. As I'm taking it that the persuing group will not take very long to gather and run after Sorn and Gurth, perhaps Gurth turns an decides to fight them?

Perhaps he comes across a dilemma when he hears Lin in distress, and turns on Sorn whilst he's distracted?

Please let me know what you think

- Tara

littlemanpoet · 12-04-2006, 11:02 AM

I think it would be great to have the chaotic Gurth switch loyalties right at the crucial time, and of course AFTER he starts fighting against Eodwine's Erolingas.

So, who kills Sorn? Gurth? How close does Scyld come to catching it? Wounded? How does Linduial feel about Scyld protecting her from Sorn? Good stuff!

12-02-2006, 12:11 PM	#1
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	Good.

12-02-2006, 10:28 PM	#2
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	Here is my attempt to salvage the post I've been struggling with. I have every idea that some changes wil be needed, so please point them out. Hopefully I got the direction/timing/wording in some sort of neat order. Also, Ang, please let me know if I should make changes to Gurth's parts. If people wish to have Sorn spotted and chased after, I have no problems. I suppose I'd like him to have some sort of lead so his story can play out. But I'm more than willing to think up some more ideas. - Tara

12-02-2006, 10:56 PM	#3
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	I think it's great! Good writing! Your struggles seem to have paid off.

12-03-2006, 12:16 AM	#4
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	You have my thanks for a good idea, Elempi. It got the writing block un-stuck, so to speak - Tara

12-03-2006, 08:15 PM	#5
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	Much welcomes! I'm glad it helped.

12-04-2006, 05:28 AM	#6
Taralphiel Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Swan Wood Posts: 649	Great posts! Wow, this is getting so exciting! I figure if I balance my lunch hour well tomorrow I can hand-write some notes for my next post Taking into account the planning below, I'll be able to flesh something out in the next couple of days... I'll have Sorn hear the shouts of Eodwine, take off up the hill and confront Scyld. This is an idea I'd like to throw out. As I'm taking it that the persuing group will not take very long to gather and run after Sorn and Gurth, perhaps Gurth turns an decides to fight them? Perhaps he comes across a dilemma when he hears Lin in distress, and turns on Sorn whilst he's distracted? Please let me know what you think - Tara

12-04-2006, 11:02 AM	#7
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	I think it would be great to have the chaotic Gurth switch loyalties right at the crucial time, and of course AFTER he starts fighting against Eodwine's Erolingas. So, who kills Sorn? Gurth? How close does Scyld come to catching it? Wounded? How does Linduial feel about Scyld protecting her from Sorn? Good stuff!