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03-19-2008, 08:51 AM
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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: The Edge of Faerie
Posts: 7,066
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Change the first part of Raefindan's last sentence to this:
"Though my will, mind and body were used, it was another who sought to kill,..." and then finish it the way you have. |
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