Treachery of Men Discussion/Planning Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Nogrod · 06-14-2008, 08:16 PM

I managed to write an ending post for Embla and Fastarr but as there were so many things I'd like to hear Lalaith's POV on I sent it to her first to be corrected / revised / deleted...

But that hopefully is coming soon and then the two will be written off.

It has been a great game but possibly a bit too complicated as a story in this kind of forum. The several sub-plots just didn't catch fire similarily and then many people were forced to wait when they would have wished to write and were required writing when they hadn't a chance.

But a great story!

*Just wondering how good this could have been* (never do that, I know...

)

PS. Don't worry elempi, Embla and Fastarr will be fine!

06-14-2008, 08:16 PM	#13
Nogrod Flame of the Ainulindalë Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves Posts: 9,308	I managed to write an ending post for Embla and Fastarr but as there were so many things I'd like to hear Lalaith's POV on I sent it to her first to be corrected / revised / deleted... But that hopefully is coming soon and then the two will be written off. It has been a great game but possibly a bit too complicated as a story in this kind of forum. The several sub-plots just didn't catch fire similarily and then many people were forced to wait when they would have wished to write and were required writing when they hadn't a chance. But a great story! Just wondering how good this could have been (never do that, I know... ) PS. Don't worry elempi, Embla and Fastarr will be fine! __________________ Upon the hearth the fire is red Beneath the roof there is a bed; But not yet weary are our feet...