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Eönwë · 03-14-2009, 05:36 PM

This thread seems quite good
Or was when people posted
Can we do better?

I will now try one
Just to see what I can do
Within haiku rules:

Frodo walks at night
With the ring around his neck
Silent in the dark

He goes to Mordor
The darkest land of shadow
Left in the third age

But with him comes help
Trusty gardener at his side
To help on his way

To fight the dark foes
The orcs and the cave spider
Far from the green Shire

Armed with their weapons
Sting and the light of a star
Through darkness they go

To finish the quest
To destroy Sauron's One Ring
There and back again

Continuing this
Is a very easy thing
Once you understand.

03-14-2009, 05:36 PM	#11
Eönwë Flame Imperishable Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Right here Posts: 3,928	This thread seems quite good Or was when people posted Can we do better? I will now try one Just to see what I can do Within haiku rules: Frodo walks at night With the ring around his neck Silent in the dark He goes to Mordor The darkest land of shadow Left in the third age But with him comes help Trusty gardener at his side To help on his way To fight the dark foes The orcs and the cave spider Far from the green Shire Armed with their weapons Sting and the light of a star Through darkness they go To finish the quest To destroy Sauron's One Ring There and back again Continuing this Is a very easy thing Once you understand. __________________ Welcome to the Barrow Do-owns Forum / Such a lovely place Last edited by Eönwë; 03-14-2009 at 05:54 PM.