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A Voice That Gainsayeth
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: In that far land beyond the Sea
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Oh, my! What a situation - especially for poor Óin to return into!
![]() Btw, Dury - I think you are missing a word in the second sentence of the second paraghraph for Kór ![]()
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Ghost Prince of Cardolan
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Facing the world's troubles with Christ's hope!
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My goodness! I intended for Onli to get the chewing out (sorry Legate
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A Voice That Gainsayeth
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Estelo dagnir, Melo ring
Join Date: Oct 2002
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Thank you, Legate - I put a 'tell' in there as I had meant to... And sorry...though Korin of course means to completely ignore Onli, I do not mean to, so please let me know if I need to edit anything in...I tend to 'ignore' characters in my posts sometimes because I don't want to write someone else's character for them in any way.
I don't know how so many of my characters end up as drama queens...or emo...or both. ![]() |
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Ghost Prince of Cardolan
Join Date: Nov 2007
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Alright y'all, I won't be here for the next couple of days so I expect postings in my absence!
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A Voice That Gainsayeth
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Oh my, what are you going to do?
![]() I hope to post something soon - I have been ridiculously busy lately.
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Shade with a Blade
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It is done.
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A Voice That Gainsayeth
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I have posted something, too. Dury, I left the end sort of open with Onli - I did not know whether you don't want to interact in some way there. I can change the ending in some way that would fit you (like, let Vriti approach Kórin, if she wants to play with her too or something; or let it completely finish in some way, if you want to let Kórin go free at last).
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"Should the story say 'he ate bread,' the dramatic producer can only show 'a piece of bread' according to his taste or fancy, but the hearer of the story will think of bread in general and picture it in some form of his own." -On Fairy-Stories |
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