* *A New Project ~~~ Revising the Ainulindale* *

[Arvegil145]

Also, have you included Morwë and Nurwë in The Coming of the Elves?

[Findegil]

Yes, I included Morwë and Nurwë, so I think this will need discussuion once we reach that point.

Respectfuly
Findegil

[gandalf85]

It's pretty crazy how old this thread is and how long this project has been ongoing. I read through the Ainulindale chapter, I only have minor comments.

1) In §20 the "flame imperishable" is lowercase. This is how it is in Morgoth's Ring, but everywhere Tolkien capitalized it. I think we should capitalize it here to be consistent.

2) In §26 there is a reference to "the Eä". It looks like this was changed from "the World". I can't find any instances of Tolkien using "the" before Eä, I think we should remove "the".

[Findegil]

It's pretty crazy how old this thread is ...

To be sure this is by fare not the oldest thread!

I agree to both changes. Just to make it easier to find ‘the Eä’ is in §23 not §26.

Respectfully
Findegil

[gandalf85]

Oops, yes I meant §23.