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09-29-2017, 06:08 PM	#7
ArcusCalion Quentingolmo Join Date: Aug 2017 Posts: 525	EPE-EX-21.05: I would use "especially" instead of "as". This flows better, and holds the meaning of the original more I think. EPE-EX-23.2: I would recommend deleting it. EPE-EX-31.1: sounds good.

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