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Nerwen · 12-29-2017, 04:50 AM

A dark figure loomed behind the mourners, the icy glow of its pale eyes like remote and baleful stars.

"Cold be heart and limbs so stiff,"
it moaned chillingly, in a voice desolate as the winter wind,
"and cold be sleep at base of cliff.
Unfinished the note in lifeless hand,
unnamed the ones with evil plans.
There shall she lie until the seas
dry in the Dark Lord's withering breeze-

-Wait, does anyone have a better rhyme for 'seas'? I'd really like to give the poor Blossom a hideous dirge worthy of her, and "breeze" just doesn't seem to fit the mood I'm going for."

12-29-2017, 04:50 AM	#5
Nerwen Wisest of the Noldor Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: ˙˙˙ssɐןƃ ƃuıʞooן ǝɥʇ ɥƃnoɹɥʇ Posts: 6,694	A dark figure loomed behind the mourners, the icy glow of its pale eyes like remote and baleful stars. "Cold be heart and limbs so stiff," it moaned chillingly, in a voice desolate as the winter wind, "and cold be sleep at base of cliff. Unfinished the note in lifeless hand, unnamed the ones with evil plans. There shall she lie until the seas dry in the Dark Lord's withering breeze- -Wait, does anyone have a better rhyme for 'seas'? I'd really like to give the poor Blossom a hideous dirge worthy of her, and "breeze" just doesn't seem to fit the mood I'm going for." __________________ "Even Nerwen wasn't evil in the beginning." –Elmo.