The Hunt for the Ring

[Findegil]

HR-SL-11.5: Godd find! I agree, so I think we should edit it in on place a bit different:

Gandalf {says}said that this {is}was ill-treatment which Théoden {will}would rue{. He does}, and that Theoden did not understand the urgency of the times. He {mentions}mentioned the dreadful rumors of the passage of the Black Riders which have terrified all Rohan. ...

To the issue with the structure I will come back, when I have analysed the next chapter in more detail.

Respectfully
Findegil