The Ride of Eorl - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

ArcusCalion · 01-15-2019, 11:04 PM

1) Agreed to italicize it.

2) Good catches

3) This is a good point, and it makes for a better opening to the subheading. I agree to this movement. The Cirion and Eorl subheading will now begin with "{In the days of Cirion ... Rohirrim rescued the realm.} When the war [of the Balcoth] ..." with the marker RS-SL-12b. The first two paragraphs will be moved to the place gandalf suggests under the marker RS-SL-11b.

4) Agreed

5) Nice finds! Agreed to both.

Findegil · 01-16-2019, 01:30 PM

I agree to all of these changes.

Respectfully
Findegil

01-15-2019, 11:04 PM	#1
ArcusCalion Quentingolmo Join Date: Aug 2017 Posts: 525	1) Agreed to italicize it. 2) Good catches 3) This is a good point, and it makes for a better opening to the subheading. I agree to this movement. The Cirion and Eorl subheading will now begin with "{In the days of Cirion ... Rohirrim rescued the realm.} When the war [of the Balcoth] ..." with the marker RS-SL-12b. The first two paragraphs will be moved to the place gandalf suggests under the marker RS-SL-11b. 4) Agreed 5) Nice finds! Agreed to both.

01-16-2019, 01:30 PM	#2
Findegil King's Writer Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,721	I agree to all of these changes. Respectfully Findegil