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07-01-2023, 09:47 PM
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Emperor of the South Pole
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: The Western Shore of Lake Evendim
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The Corsairs of Umbar was an interesting read and the way it was broken into scenes was good.
I sort of felt more intricate detail could be woven into many of the sections, but that is just me I think. |
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