Best/Worse lines for RotK - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

QN_VICTORIA · 02-01-2004, 01:46 PM

WORST:You wish now that our places had been exchanged..That I had died, and Boromir lived" ... "YES I DO WISH THAT" Needs Improvement: Don't..Don't you let go, reach!! I think they could've made the dialougue between Frodo, and Sam a bit better when Sam is trying to pull Frodo from going into the fires of Mordor..don't get me wrong it was good, but I didn't quite feel in the moment, as much as I thought I could've been. Maybe: Sam:"Don't you even think about letting go!!!, Don't you give up, after we've come so far Mr.Frodo...." or something like that, but a bit more, I don't know I'm not a screenplay expert, What lines do you guyz think that were good, but could've used a bit of improvement??

02-01-2004, 01:46 PM	#13
QN_VICTORIA Pile O'Bones Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: unknown Posts: 20	WORST:You wish now that our places had been exchanged..That I had died, and Boromir lived" ... "YES I DO WISH THAT"<BR> Needs Improvement: Don't..Don't you let go, reach!!<P> I think they could've made the dialougue between Frodo, and Sam a bit better when Sam is trying to pull Frodo from going into the fires of Mordor..don't get me wrong it was good, but I didn't quite feel in the moment, as much as I thought I could've been. Maybe:<BR> Sam:"Don't you even think about letting go!!!, Don't you give up, after we've come so far Mr.Frodo...." or something like that, but a bit more, I don't know I'm not a screenplay expert, <P> What lines do you guyz think that were good, but could've used a bit of <I>improvement</I>?? __________________ I can avoid being seen if I wish